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by goldhorse

person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I sympathize greatly, milady. I too, had the stomach flu last week for three fun-filled days. And, after I got over it, I laid my bike down and belly surfed for six feet on asphalt! Totally scuffed up my saddlebags and the sticker that my sister got me that says "Straight Girls Ride Too". I'm more upset about that than the Road Rash and bruises!

Keep writing-your stories always make me smile (even when I'm limping and sore).
person Kimbovet
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Ron is gay. Wasn't expecting that. Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love happy endings. :-) I know it's not the end of the story, but everyone is happy for a bit and that's nice. Thanks! HG4eva
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Things are starting to come together... yay!! But, I sense a storm on the horizon, named, Lucius. Eek! Thanks again, hon. HG4eva
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, considering you're STILL posting full chapters within days of each other, AND you have me checking every hour on the hour for each new one, I'd say you're doing splendidly! :D Also, you suck. lol I have LOTS of questions. ...meanie... lol
person DB1
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@50 great story. Loving each new update!!! Can't wait for more

DB
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I like Venus! She seems fun lol. Strutting snape...hmm, now that is an interesting image. I am glad everyone is getting along better! Someone aught to put Pansy in her place though. Maybe Venus XD Can't wait to read more hun and I hope you are feeling better!
person white dragon
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for continuing this wonderful story. as stated before, i too am in bed waiting to die from bronchitis. turns out i herniated a disc in my neck and bruised my ribs from all the coughing. your stories are great b/c they take my mind off an otherwise horrible world of agony. again, my thanks!
person Kimbovet
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice, funny chapter! As a southern preacher would say, "Be healed! Arise from your sickbed & write some more for us!" ;-)
person SadieW
schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a review for chapter 38. I knew it would happen. (The pregnancy.) I picked up on the clue in the prophesy. But I didn't expect it to happen now! They're not even out of school yet! And how can she withstand whatever occurs in the woods if she's pregnant? Further, how in the world did Draco's little swimmers drop their "sterile" status?? And I'm so sad for the other couples who are torn apart! :( And oh man...Harry....when he finds out about Venus! (I wonder if she's read all the books, newspaper articles, etc. about her baby brother? Aww) I'm not much of an avid Snape fan so that part of the story, while it does touch me, doesn't drive the story for me. (For me, it's about Venus and Harry and their link to Lily and to each other.) This is a well-written story and I look forward to the other chapters that you've already posted (I'm coming into this late.). Thanks and keep it up!
Cheers,
Sadie