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for Locked In

by goldhorse

schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Little problem with calling someone 'petty' even in your mind..... it tends to piss them off royally and I'm pretty sure Draco, if this was real life, would find that out REAL quick.
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lights, Camera, ACTION!!!!! Always love action! And aren't we forgetting a certain sadistic, psychotic, cultist healer...?
person anaidra
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
As always, really good chapter :). I think it is a good thing that also other people know about Draco and Hermione being married and expecting a baby girl. Now they would have even more hands to help once Lucius appears again on the scene. :)
Please more!
schedule April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Of course we all need sap! Sap makes syrup! Syrup goes on waffles! Without sap, how would I eat my waffles...? :D I love that Godric and Salazar still argue like children. lol Makes visits from them so much more entertaining. :D And your chapters made my day. :D I read BTP and FF last night after the shittiest work day. Made going to sleep worth it just to wake up and know you'd have more waiting for us. :)
person Kimbovet
schedule April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the squabbling Founders & I'm glad the others are going to help protect Hermione. Bring on Lucius!
schedule April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First off, that is one of my favorite childhood books and I love the reference. Second, sappy, yes. But a great chapter none the less. I'm glad that someone else knows, now they can help keep an eye on things and help encourage others! Can't wait to read more hun.
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, now that you say that... his luck won't hold, will it...? That's gonna suck.... I'm glad you're feeling better. :)
person anaidra
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron! ;) But I am glad his friends are okay with him.
I think, no I know I am repeating myself but I love the story and cant wait for the next chapter and the enlightening :).
person anaidra
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Chap. 49+50 - good job. I like Venus. She seems cool. Hope you will tell us more about Naomi.
Please update soon or ... not so soon beacuse it will mean the story is one chapter near its end :).
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow...gay Ron. Wasn't expecting that o.O Great chapter hun! Can't wait to read more.