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by goldhorse

schedule March 22, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Oh gods...Hermione's caveman talk...🤣🤣

person MotekElm
schedule February 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

great job. you're a fantastic author!

person MotekElm
schedule February 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

this is an amazing,  wonderful story, but this last chapter really makes it a favorite for me. Every delivery in every book or movie seems to forget birthing the placenta, leading to so many women being more shocked and uncomfortable than they should be at that time of delivery. it's just a sentence, but the fact you remembered it makes me so happy!!!!

schedule January 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Very fun, very inventive, and very sweet. Thank you for the enjoyable read!

person LadyRin
schedule March 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Write this one please:#2: Hermione and Draco are both dancers and have been since they were 5. They were friends, though Hogwarts strained their relationship. The war is over and they are both severely damaged. They are creatures in this one, but I'm not saying what kind just yet. They'll have a mission from the Ministry... and their love lives to figure out.

person Mary_Met
schedule August 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

All your stories I have read have been great! Loving this and I vote for #3. We need a Snape centric story. I don't know if you still look at these reviews or not, but I am so glad I found you. However- I can't bear the thought that you use bare instead of bear for a burden. LOL I am so pissy, sorry. If I could do better, then why don't I write. Because you are so good I would be shamed.

Mary

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

In reading this I was wondering 2 questions. 1st is poe's love Lenore; Mellora; or Annabelle Lee? 2nd if you do write a sequel to this story are you going to continue to have the Unspeakables be like the Leverage crew ( regular cases are like corrupt politicians, & Voldemort & Lucius are like larger like Damian Moroe)? 

person meldz
schedule January 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. Thanks
person Meeshs Wand
schedule November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story. I'm almost speechless. Lol. 5 stars!
person Anika Cobriana
schedule August 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, absolutely fantastic!!!