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by Bickymonster

person delia cerrano
schedule August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Everybody seems to be calming down & thinking a little bit. Did we ever find out who gve out the info for the article?
If so I've forgotten.
schedule August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love that his mother is every so often in this as well...
as for the summery it just seemed like he was... confused or maybe you were confused trying to summarize it lol if that makes sense.. the way it was put it seemed like it was going to be a lot of flash backs and not much of anytthing else i suppose or more of a one shot ><
glad to see its really good though ^^
schedule August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I am curious about the letters Blaise and Pansy got.
schedule August 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The headmaster actually seems correctly done in character as do most of the others.... snape most of all i believe... my congratulations on this it is very well done and i enjoy that due to the beginning summery i had my reservations.
I am curious if you will be explaining how a sub come into their inheritance more closely. As i enjoyed that you explained why neither malfoy or Narcissus were one at all. i was actually about to comment a question on that till you explained it honestly.
I am curious about if harry will actually start acting against his inheritance more when it comes to feelings however having been hot headed ish in moments ect....
person Dawn
schedule August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please update soon!!!!!
schedule August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So, I'm just chiming in. Started reading this yesterday and just reached the current chapter today. Very interesting. I love that you are using a different creature inheritance then is normally seen and can't wait to read more.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Peoples true characters seem to be peeking out a little bit...Good!
person ChaosLady
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is not going to like Draco's attitude, not after dealing with the headmaster's shit. Excellent update!
person Dawn
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just got caught up with this story...it's wonderful. If you could add me to your email group that would be awesome! My email is dmgokey@yahoo.com. thank you!
person RedRose
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and i wouldbe very happy if you would add me to your mailing list. My email is stormhawk33blacksky@gmail.com