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Thank you for updating this so soon! It was an enjoyable read.

Aww,pregnant Draco is so cute! Will his cravings be food or Harry? Can't wait until the parents find out. Can they fly with their wings? I'd like to see possessive protective Harry save Draco from something. Keep writing,it's great so far.

way to go Hermione... an embarrassed Harry is cute! I definitely don't think they should sleep together yet. Since you plan this story to have a light tone then the whole focus is on their relationship and sleeping together would just kind of seem to be settling anything they have to work through because it would mean they already totally accept and are comfortable with everything. But I like the embarrassment! Is it wrong that I find it cute? nawwww....

Anyway... I so can picture them figuring out ways to keep contact more often while they become more familiar with each other. That kind of touching when Draco isn't so tired and ready to fall asleep can make things very fun and interesting. Maybe touching feet which turns into playing footsie in potions? lol And kissing would help Draco to feel less drained too. You also mentioned that the feelings and emotions would make a difference. Harry hasn't had much practice so any kind of touching & kissing would probably have a LOT of emotion from Harry.

Stuff like that will also help them to become more comfortable with learning how to be more physically intimate.

I like that Harry liked watching Draco sleep and that Draco pretended to be a little reluctant about Hermione visiting. Cute slytherin planning lol.

Ohh yay! A creature/mpreg fic that acual shows a lot of potential. It's been a whe since I've read one that has caught my attention. Keep up the good work! Please update soon!

So far so good. Looking forward to more. I will look forward to seeing not only to Ron/Herm reactions but also Pansy/Blaise since they were mentioned. Seeing if they are devoted friends or fake friends.

I think that this story is really good,and has potential to go farther than 3 chapters. :) In my opinion,you shouldn't make the mistake that I see too often and have Harry and Draco feel completely comfortable and happy about the whole situation and sudden feelings for each other. I personally don't care for their friends being immediately understanding of it,or completely disowning them,but everyone has their own opinion on that. I'm sure that however you go with their friends,it will work for your story. As a last thought,they should also take time to understand and master the abilities that you give them,rather than mastering them right away. This is all meant to be constructive,and I hope that I can help. :) Sorry for such a long review,btw. I look forward to reading more of this story. Good luck and keep up the good work.

I like the premise and it's interesting so far. Wonder if they'll ever recall what they did during a call or do their creatures completely take over. Okay so maybe I'm fishing for some lemon scene of their first time together *wink*

Hope you continue the story.

I do like a good creature fic! And bonus, wings!

This story has the chance to be really good. I can't wait for the next update!

I'm actually very pleased with the way the reactions turned out. I think it's partly because you didn't just make them accept it,they asked more questions,unlike other fanfics I've read. All in all it's shaping up nicely,and I look forward to more.