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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Blaise is always great for some light humor to ease the tension and rev up Draco's emotions. I loved how you settle the boys differences by making them "feel" just what the other was upset about. Sure does work better than words and any stumbling through misunderstandings due to a lack of communication! Ah if it was always that simple.
~~ Meechy
~~ Meechy
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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad they are working things out a bit. Would Like to see more of Draco acting out in his preg. state...food cravings that make Harry gag but he runs to get it for him, Harry trying to make Draco take better care of himself & fussing over him when he feels he's not, deciding on names & baby furnishings as well as where they will live/who will take care of baby.
I think I like Severus with Lucius but Narcissa? They seem like too rigid, too somber, too internalizing to ever even say anything or feel enough for each other to say/do anything. Pansy? An opposite would be Neville who can be surprisingly strong minded (to control her) when he wants to be.
I think I like Severus with Lucius but Narcissa? They seem like too rigid, too somber, too internalizing to ever even say anything or feel enough for each other to say/do anything. Pansy? An opposite would be Neville who can be surprisingly strong minded (to control her) when he wants to be.
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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! How about doing a threesome with Severus, Narcissa, and Lucius? Although it should not happen as quickly as Draco and Harry got together, it should be a more gradual and subtle thing. Maybe have it start when Narcissa and Lucius come to the school wondering what's going on with their son and Harry Potter. Have Pansy pair up with Seamus, that would be funny if they have a passionate and somewhat secret love affair. Kind of a love/hate thing.
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January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So far this story is very interesting, I can't wait to see what's going to happen between our two lovely boys, please update chapter 4 soon ^_^
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January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So good! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I haven't been this excited about a story for a loooong time!
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January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more! Hopefully soon.
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Getting even better. I can't wait to read the next chapter,I hope the writing bug can keep at least weekly updates though,lol. Even if not,I'll keep watching for it. :D
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol had a feeling that was going to be the case and i loved the game of "who can make the group feel the most awkward", wonderfully done, can just see mione and harry blushing up a storm. keep up the good work :D
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story! I loved that little moment Harry and Ron had before Harry went back to Draco, it was sweet. Little things like that really let readers into the characters relationships. Keep up the good work!