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montyf101@gmail.com

Wow awesome story so far! Cant wait to sde the result of that last little slytherin powow.. I would really like to recieve email updates, thank you for the option. My email is jessmurray.94@gmail.com. Cant wait to hear from you!

You're going to show a Sev/Luc scene, right? O.O Right?! XD

Hey, I would love to be added to the email group. This is an amazing story and I'm loving the dimension, entertainment, and wonder all intertwined into the story, it's wonderful!

Plz add me to the update list? Loving the story....

I found this mistake..."Harry awoke suddenly as if someone had been screaming in his ear, every (Inch) of his skin was tingling" NOT "Harry awoke suddenly as if someone had been screaming in his ear, every (each) his skin was tingling" Other then that,
WOW! is all I can say about this chapter. they moved a beautiful step forward and I was moved by their small declarations of love for each other. by the end I was in tears with poor Draco over his vary rational fears for their uncertain future together I know that the road will be a vary bumpy and dangerous one for the both of them but I cant help but wish to help them have the 'happy' ending that they both deserve. but its still for the fates to decide what happens may they smiled upon ........ please update soon thanks for the email :)

if I offend u by pointing out that small error I found im sorry that was not my intention. but I have a small request to ask u bickymonster. I have 2 small poems I would like to have your option on. nothing like your wonderful stories, but if u could take time out of your busy schedule to gave me your 2 cents on my work I would be grateful to have your option on it. please let me know via my email with your answer. thank u for your time on this matter . your fan, nari-chan

I really like this story. It also has the advantage of some unique (at least, to me) qualities. I've read several stories in which Harry [and partner] received a winged creature inheritance, but none quite like these. I thoroughly enjoyed Draco's solution to his father's anger. It still makes me chuckle. The Marauders would be very proud - The ultimate prank, played on Severus and Lucius!

I don't often review. Medical issues often make it too difficult. But I couldn't pass up the opportunity to add myself to your mailing list. I would like to be added to your mailing list for this story, but also, if you have one, I'd like to be added to your list for all your stories.

That would be wonderful. Thank you so much.

queenreader51@yahoo.com

I've been very entertained by your story and I look forward to your future chapters with great anticipation. The way all of Harry's and Draco's friends are standing by them and willing to get to know the other is great, usually Harry has at lease one 'friend' working [or trying to] people up to hurt him.



btw: I hope you don't mind me mentioning it but I noticed a typo - I'm Australian, so that's what I'm basing this on. In the first line of the last scene (with the Griffindors) you've written "Did you forget that Harry was here and THERE FOR your tactics...", it should be one word with an 'e' at the end -- 'therefore'.

Oh Oh is Draco going to feel like he has to separate himself from Harry to protect himself & their child? That could shatter Harry to be abandoned like that!! Please add me to your list to be notified of your story postings. My email is:
valcarrier@aol.com. Thank you ver much. You are making my life much easier by doing this.