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One other thing I like about your story: There's not too many grammatical mistakes, typos or misspelled words. I don't mind a mistake here and there, I usually overlook it and can easily fill in the blanks. But to have it happen to where every sentence is completely garbled, I never read those and usually tell the author to get a beta-reader and/or a spellchecker.

I started reading this story because it was an interesting twist on the Magical Creature idea. I keep reading it because the story is well written and because I want to see how everything is going to turn out.

Um...yeah...dinner with Severus and Lucius was never going to end well, at least not the first go around. Right now emotions are too high, past memories are too close and new love is way too fragile. Maybe after some thinking and quiet introspection things may take some small baby steps forward in the want for everyone to just get along!

~~ Meechy

I am really loving this story, I cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted, do you have any idea when it will be?

Thanks for a brilliant story and please keep on writing, I will be waiting impatiently for the next instalment.

Kristy x

Glad to see this updated. Draco and Harry's banter are so amusing.

You had me at Erotes lol I'm in love love with this story.

Okay you got me hooked; I'm more a Snarry fan but this one has got my attention and smiling. So kudos to you. You're doing a wonderful job dealing with certain issues that would come from Harry and Draco becoming an item; all with out the dark Harry, Mione/Ron/Ginny/Dumbledore bashing that is most common. I find it rather difficult to do personally (the stories I'm currently working on are really Dumbledore bashing), so I tip my hat to you. Interesting twist with Lucius there, I laughed my butt off when I read the way he 'crawled towards Snape'. A Malfoy...Crawling...Oh the mental image! Ron is being quite mature and even though he admits to still not liking Draco, he isn't being his hot-headed self. It's rather refreshing; and Ginny, wow, I never thought she would be so hateful of Slytherins, makes Harry and Draco's job of getting her and Blaise together more challenging. Keep up the good work, I'd like to know when you update!

Leania
(leania07 @ gmail . com )

Lol, Draco is just to funny whrn describing women, but really Hermione needs to relax a bit, and not take everything to heart, here they are talking about sex and she takes it to mean that Draco would never be into her because of her blood! I mean really how can you jump to that conclusion when they're talking about sex!?
And Luna! Gods I love her character, with her personality and her ability to predict things, yes definitely one of my fav.
Can't wait to for you to update chapter 19 to see if it'll be a disaster or a success, with Harry having his first dinner with both his father in laws, seeing how it went when he visited Narcissa and all.

So lived the little joking of sitting next to granger! Curly parts? Tuck! Was another really great chapter. Hurry up with exams and get back to work...loved it!

Update soon!