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I love that you are continuing to update! I honor you for your stick-to-it-tiveness. Too often a story just peters out leaving a reader wanting to scream or cry or both including track the writer down & force them to finish. I think Lucius is going to be the weak leak. He cares for Sev more than he knows but right now he is thinking like his worst self. After he's leaked some info he will realize Sev, Draco & Harry were right & Lucius cares for them all way more than he thought he did. Well, maybe, that's what I think anyway.

LOL to true, however I have a scientific mind and even though I simply love dragons, the concept of flying with wings too small (think Pete's Dragon) is just stretching things. I'll give the magical currents would be a boon, but that would mean the wings would be more for direction and the magical currents are what makes him fly. However, I'm not disputing your method, just simply explaining my thought process ;) This is your story of course and my opinion I expect is used as feedback and nothing more; which is fine by me. Can I take the closest stone wall and bash Lucius' head into it? If Harry is oblivious then Lucius is just single minded. Honestly, just because Severus is the ultimate Slytherin (what with convincing deception and self-preservation), does not mean that he is playing a game with Lucius. This is why I always find it difficult to believe two Slytherins would make a lasting marriage; they'd spend so much time believing the other to be playing a game and trying to 'one up' each other to work properly on the relationship. Not to mention they'd both be to 'cautious' to admit their feelings; add to that a Slytherin who's paranoid and suspicious of everything and well, can we say explosive? I'm willing to see how this works, or how you make it work ;). Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to how things go with the Ginny and Blaise plot, the statement they give, and how well everyone takes it, or doesn't.

Leania

well well well i am left with many questions about with this chapter. its kina shocking i didn't peg snape to have an alter motive for power? though he works both sides i was hoping that he was doing things for the right reasons. but i guess "right reasons" can vary from person to person and it can be tricky to consider what is valuable to one and make them do things. i just hope that he is genuine with Lucius. they are happy together it seem and i don't want to watch them shatter so easy.
The coming out ? wow that is a good and bad idea all wrapped up in one big ball of gasoline soaked trouble. i agree with the snakes 100%
well things just got a lot interesting and i cant wait till you update again :)

Oh Lucius, what devious plans are you coming up with?

Please update chapter 22 soon ^_^

Update soon!

Amazing so far. Loving it...

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This is hilarious! I can't stop laughing. Totally what I needed tonight. Thanks!

it it wrong to just realize that al the chapter in this story start with E? lol i got to the almost last chapter and was like oh lol

I'm glad the boys finally took flight. It is kind of why they have wings to begin with!! I'm glad Harry is protective of Draco but works very hard not to smother him with that need to protect. Poor Lupin is so worried that something will happen to his cub and have him get hurt, he may be missing what's right in front of him. I'm glad that Pansy and Hermione are trying to get along, but Ginny is in for some real disappointment. Even if someone in Slytherin goes after the boys, it won't be someone that Draco truly trusts and in the end, Harry will never turn from Draco to Ginny. She will learn the hard way just how much in love and devoted Harry is to his soulmate and child.

~~ Meechy