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for Kaleidoscope

by Nocturne

schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ps smoking is bad for you... That's hilarious. I like this story so far. I liked how you changed it, how it's not a time travel story. Very unique =) can't wait to read more.
person Bkd
schedule April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha that was absolutely the funniest ending to a chapter - EVER! You've got then smoking and chatting and sitting around all sexy like, you describe the smoking in do much detail and then add an A/N in capitals about how bad smoking is. Lol. Was brilliant.
Anyway, liked how this has started off. Ron is so very Ron and Sirius is just awesome.
person Mark's Pet
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh...you did not just leave us with such a cliffie?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

You are soooo cruel. This story is getting very interesting and the HOT STUFF was just beginning *ARCH*.

Please post more SOON!!!!!
person curiositykilledthecat
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I NEVER review stories, but i just had to with this one. Bloody loved it. What happens next?
Your characters are going to be complex me thinks...
xxx
person LittleLotte
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am loving the way you are setting this up and will be waiting expectantly for the next installment!