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schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, just awesome. I especially love how your dragging out the suspense with Snape and that part. I say this with a complete lack of sarcasm, that I love it because I HATE it LOL. Congrats! Oh, and for a second there, you had me worried about Wallias working for Dumbledore! It wasn't for too long, before I realized what he was doing, but still!
person delia cerrano
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Does my heart good to read of Dumbledore and all his little brown nose followers that are trembling with worry!!
person Crow
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an awesome story. I love it. Please continue soon! Great story!
person Jan
schedule September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They're finally French citizen! Can't wait o the trials to start. Please update chapter 20 soon ^_^
person delia cerrano
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Continues to really hold my interest and in fact is begining to ramp up to some really great, fun, intense scenes soon.
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Speedy, you are my hero. After working my entire 3 day weekend on homework from am to pm, plus the last week, I am SOOO grateful to see a chapter up of something I follow when I finally got a break. Thank you! I loved the chapter. It seems like Albus is already starting to squirm a bit which is wonderful. I like how you made it more realistic with how Seri and Remi won't be able to learn as fast as Harry. As much as I hate to admit it, especially since I will be taking a foreign language soon, children learn faster then adults lol. Nice to see the break down of how everything is working and all areas work together to get justice! Can't wait to read more.
person psychosmurf
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
cH 8 I am soooo LOVING Septima!!!
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A nice transitional chapter, leading to wonderful goodies in the future. I must say though, that I'm dying from the suspense. I SO want to see what happens with Snape!! When he realizes just what he's landed himself in when the expected 'backup' (I know that's not the word I'm looking for but I'm blanking out at the moment) is whipped out from under him.
schedule August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm glad most of the Weasley's are smart enough to get out of this mess. They may be partially at fault for just stepping back, but they thought they were doing what was right and simply trusted the wrong man. I can't wait to hear what Arabella has to say and see what you have in mind for Sev. Normally I would feel bad for him, and in a way I do, but he is clearly not the misunderstood good guy in this.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That meeting with Snape should be very hard emotionally for Harry & those that care for him. What can Severus possibly say to defend himself for what he did to Harry & Neville. Want to hear more about what the Weasleys and Hermione think and are doing.