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December 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoy the story. Wish there was more interaction between Harry & Lucius. They just seem like buddies and why would Lucius put himself out that much for just a friend. Or at least that's his reputation...very contained business man, lots of ego. Love reading that Albus and the Weasleys are going to get it and that Severus already has (though I usually love Severus...not this time).
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December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Albus is sure going to get it once Lucius gets his hands on him ^_^
Please update chapter 25 soon.
Please update chapter 25 soon.
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December 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see the retribution really get started. Hoping to read more of Harry & Lucius and maybe Draco's feelings and how they play out as a couple and how Draco will fit in.
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December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really hope that the DMLE are able to arrest Dumbledore before he runs. He definitely deserves time in prison, esecially after hiring a man that molested the children he was supposed to protect. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!
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November 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
and finally got caught back up with this one as well. a lot going on but you've done a great job keeping everything in order and easy to follow. so glad that they got ahold of snape and loved his punishment lol, and good to see how they're progressing with taking down everyone else. keep up the great work, can't wait to see more :)
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November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You can see the whole thing pulling together and it's great! There are so many things to look forward to and to wonder about. I'm not to sure what I think about Harry ignoring everything, but I definitely understand it. The end scene with him and Lucius was just great.
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November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Going good. Loved the tender moments with Lucius and Harry. Wish we had more and more giving us an insight into what Harry thinks about all the "players", what happened and what he feels about those with him now as well as what he sees for his future.
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October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ach!!! a clffie...wonderful so far and I do like the revenge on Snape!!! should be done in real life...no more repeat offenders! looking forward to the next chapters...!
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Delia Cerrano & I read this chapter. Glad we are getting some answers at last even if they are pretty weak resons. We are curious about what Cornelius has to say though. We hope there will be some interaction with Harry and his protectors especially Lucius.
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohh.. They're a lot more charitable when it comes to punishment then I'd be. I'd be torture then a slow and very painful death. I like the plot line.. and I hope to read more soon!!... Sounds like Dumbledore has lots of 'splainin to do!