You're so sweet! You know I don't mind at all - and I love talking to you!
You have captured this very, very well. You've shown Harry's disgust and anger quite well, especially with the feeling he has that this is not the first time that this has happened. With Narcissa's findings only supporting that, I'm very glad that she waited until Lucius was gone to reveal that particular tidbit. This would be a very short tale indeed if Lucius ended up in Azkaban within the first couple chapters.
Not only did you do an excellent job capturing Harry's emotions, but also the gamut of emotions of those surrounding him. No matter how angry he is at the situation, Tom realizes he has to be the voice of reason, and the way you show this with him falling into his natural role as leader is executed beautifully.
I have to say that I do like how Lucius is both enraged and appalled. I do look forward to seeing how he will execute his revenge; I truly hope that Lucius and Tom determine to do something truly vicious to Snape.
I'm looking forward to more, of course! I appreciate that you're willing to write the aftermath of the darker things. Thank you very much for your opening statement. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.