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Wow, that was quite the chapter! I loved seeing how things are starting to unfold. I found it interesting how you seemed to paint Snape as more pathetic then down right villainous. Loved how Vector handled things. I hope she can get her house back in line, those kids need the kind of leadership and direction she can give them.

So good...still continues to be such a unique story. It's all happening just as needed for Harry. Hope it continues that way. I normally love Snape & in fact one of my favorite pairings is Severus/Harry. But you have made a good job of a really
horrible, unlovable, devious Severus!

I love this story.
Let Harry have a backbone even with his so called best friends.

You use the word beings in your steries for a neutral word when you write about people. In my opinion the word person or persons would be the correct one to use.
Being as in human being is used in different circumstances, e.g. Biological cathegories.

Keep updating

I thought this chapter was well done. It's a powerful subject matter with high emotional overtones, tastefully handled. My favorite part has to be the end bit that takes place at Hogwarts. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially how Hermione and Ron... and possibly, McGonagall choose to react. I almost (note: I said almost) could consider feeling sorry for Snape for oh, about half a nanosecond. I'd like to see him stand up against that robot that has cut both its opponents in half on Robot Combat League. Oh! I know! I saw on a website once these very large machines that are designed to do just what he did to Harry, only they do it mechanically.

Sorry!!! I can get really creative when I need to, and the subject matter is one that makes me feel like I need to.

Back on track here. It's a good story, I'm enjoying it. Thank you for writing it.

Great Chappy, I absolutely love the way Madam Bones is about making sure Justice is done and done properly.

Wow. That was one hell of a chapter. Major bomb to drop on everyone. I hope any other victims come forward and that SOMEONE has the sense to send different teachers down to keep on eye on the Slytherins. After all, their head of house just abandoned them and is the one accused of abuse. Can't wait to read more!

I am so excited to see you update and what a chapter... I am still buzzing from it. The way you changed scenes was perfect. It flowed well and I was not left bored due to "over sharing" from the scene before. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really want to see more of what is happening with the ministry+Lucius, the dark lord+Lucius, Albus, Moody (how he deals with Albus part in Harry treatment), and most of all Snape. I do not know if you have intentional left him as a view point out if you have that is brilliant from an author writing stand point. From a reading. Its killing me. I want to see what his thought process is and why. I beseech you please update soon and sedate my curious mind before I die from head explosion.

wow! go Harry...like to see this. too bad it does not happen in real life...
"patiently" waiting for the next chapter!!!

I have really enjoyed this fic so far and this chapter was great! Although I like Snape as a good character, I love him as a villain as well. Keep going!!

Cool story! Look forward to the next update.