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schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you threw me off with Amelia Bones being a student since I'm used to Susan Bones being the student with Amelia as the Aunt. However, since she has "parents" I figured this must be a different niece. I'm also having a bit of a problem getting my mind around Neville trying to hang himself. Then again, it was the DA and the trip to the DOM that allowed Neville to come into his own, so to speak so perhaps it isn't as OOC as it first appeared to me.

I can't wait to see how Sirius reacts when he finds out just who is babysitting Harry at the moment and learns about all that has been going on. I hope he engages his brain first. Perhaps with Lupin there he will.

So Snape thinks the Dark Lord won't care what he did to the students. Now that is a scene that I'd like to see. After spilling all of Dumbledore's secrets, Snape finds out Tom does care and turns him over to Lucius, Sirius and Lupin for playtime.

Another good chapter, another evil cliffy. Thanks.
person delia cerrano
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Keep going...keep going. I need to know what happens when Harry sees Sirius & Remus. Do they know what happened to Harry & others? Sorry don't remember. Want to see more Lucius & Harry. Not crazy about Lucius still married & having Harry on side. But love them together...oh conflicted, trying to justify it somehow. Normally love Severus especially with Harry but not this time. The slimey git!
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn you and cliff hangers my dear! Keeping my fingers crossed that this wont blow up in any faces
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a wicked wicked place to leave off! How could you? *sighs* Well, great chapter anyways. I can't wait to read more. Poor Neville, that kid just can't catch a break.
person chrissy
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great update!! Look forward to the next one!! :)
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I'm also reading Shades of Grey, it's awesome. I can wait for more updates!
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great Chappy, Can't wait for another one. Lucius is so cute and loving. *awwwwww*
person heartstar
schedule April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well done poor nev I hope she gets sev,
person djaddict
schedule April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I just can't get enough of this!

Enjoying.
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sad story but so moving. Minerva is going to be even more devastated when she finds out that not only are the accusations true but that other children are involved. Hopefully Dumbledore will truly come to realize just how much harm he has caused with his own manipulations and the fall of "Umbitch" and the ministry will bring cheers to be heard all over the castle. Unfortunately, Sirius may yet end up back in Azkaban for actually committing murder this time. At least we know that Harry now has people whe truly care about him in his corner.

~~ Meechy