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May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, can't wait for the next update...went back several chapters to catch my brain up to date...always more fun that way...even did a repeat of chapter 1...
thanks for the story!
thanks for the story!
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm amazed, I was actually expecting Serius to start yelling at least. Glad to see his love and concern for Harry outweighed that. I can't wait to read more. I feel bad for Lucius though, even though it is important, being away at such a time would drive me up the wall.
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Lucius made the right choice to not view the memories. And I can't wait to see what he says to Draco when he finally sees him in person. I'm not usually for spanking teenagers but that is one kid who soooooo deserves it! Great job in laying out all the problems with how to deal with Snape. It underlines Snape's confidence that if he keeps quiet, he'll walk away from it all. You also did a wonderful job bringing out how some victims may react to the situation.
It will be interesting to see how the Order members will deal with the repercussions of doing Dumbledore's bidding particularly since they know what they are doing is wrong but it is easy to see they are brainwashed to pursue the "greater good". It appears that Lupin's very impassioned speech about how they all let Harry down because they followed Dumbledore has fallen on deaf ears.
I love how controlled Sirius is being and that he and Harry were left alone both deriving comfort from the other. My favorite part of this chapter, though, has got to be when Tom explains why Harry is not a Death Eater. Priceless!
Another wonderful chapter. Thank you.
It will be interesting to see how the Order members will deal with the repercussions of doing Dumbledore's bidding particularly since they know what they are doing is wrong but it is easy to see they are brainwashed to pursue the "greater good". It appears that Lupin's very impassioned speech about how they all let Harry down because they followed Dumbledore has fallen on deaf ears.
I love how controlled Sirius is being and that he and Harry were left alone both deriving comfort from the other. My favorite part of this chapter, though, has got to be when Tom explains why Harry is not a Death Eater. Priceless!
Another wonderful chapter. Thank you.
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story. Poor Neville. Will he meet up with Harry?
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had to laugh at Tom's explanation to Remus "If Harry gets upset, then Narcissa..." If he doesn't sound henpecked, I don't know. You write great stories Tomato, keep up the great work.
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I do hope that they will find some way of taking care of/getting rid of/punishing (viciously ofc) Snape and Dumbledore. I am really glad that Harry has been reunited with Sirius and Remus. I believe that their presence and love will help him to heal. I am sure that they will also be more than happy to help find ways to take care of certain...issues. I look forward to the next chapter!! :D
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cool update!! I'm glad that Remy and Siri are now with Harry and I hope that they can remove both Severus and Albus from Hogwarts soon and that Umbitch gets put in Azcaban Prison soon!tbnaid
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May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A lot of people involved in this story. Can't wait to see what Sirius makes of all this. Want to see Lucius with Harry again please.
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April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this plot, well done for covering such a hard subjuect.
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April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just had to say how much I love this story. I have been home sick and found it. I just love your stories.