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person delia cerrano
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I love this story! Probably because of unusual pairing, dislike of Albus (whose always underhanded), & unusual characterizations. And we're really getting into it now. What on earth has Albus still protecting Snape (who I usually love by the way)?
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fun chapter, so much going on. Dumbledore and Snape gone, Umbridge arrested, Bill taking off for Egypt, Grimmauld sold, Sirius and Remus now completely in France. At least Arthur is starting to see how they all failed Harry and I wonder how those who are so loyal will feel when everything comes out. I found Arthur's statement telling about people thinking if it was really bad Albus would have stepped in. So many people, not just in the Order allowed so much bad to happened on the say-so of Dumbledore.

The Order is getting decimated bit by bit and I cannot wait to see the fallout from the sale of Grimmauld and defection to France of Sirius and Remus. I wonder what steps Dumbledore will take to protect Snape now? Inquiring minds and all that.

To inquire further, I wonder if Lucius will deal with Draco not listening to him at a later time, like over the holiday as it seems at this point he's getting off really easy.

I still have doubts as to whether that is really a dog. Well, the puppies do look like dogs and are cute but as they get older it appears they mutate or come into a bear inheritance or something. Some are HUGE.

Thanks for another great chapter. I've read it four times now and still picking things up. Can't wait for the next on *marks calendar for ten days hence to start being on the lookout*.
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
...I don't think the word "floofy" does that thing justice O.O Jeeze that is a lot of fluff! I would have thought a wolf hound of some sort but I like the fluff on that one better, great pick. Also, great chapter! That was a lot of information. I'm glad Draco is actually listening, or at least seems to be. I suppose that time will tell. Also, glad to see Albus gone. Serves him right and I can't wait to see what happens next!
person autumngold
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for having Dumbledore removed from the castle! Something tells me that he is going to have Snape removed with him. He would never allow Snape to be questioned by the Aurors, even if it means that more c hildren would be abused. Excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person Quaff
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love Tibetan Mastiffs. That's a great dog for Harry. I am really enjoying your story. It's about time that Dumbledore and Snape were thrown out on their collective backsides. They should be arrested and thrown into jail.
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. In fact when I find a new chapter I am forced to read it twice because it's so good. Thank you for the new chapter.
person delia cerrano
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Everything is moving along beautifully! Wish Lucius could spend more time with Harry. The Weasleys are sure getting a wake up call! Wonder how Hermione, Ron & Molly are taking it all much less the twins. And Snape & McGonagel??
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rut Roh, Albus is loosing his support bit by bit even though we haven't heard what Bill's decision will be. If he's smart, he'll head back to Egypt toot de suite. Can't wait to find out his reaction when he finds all this out, particularly Sirius and Remus' desertion.

I enjoyed how you addressed the Prophet issue. I rarely see their culpability in things addressed other than Harry is some form becomes the majority stockholder and makes them be honest. It shows another entity who is scrambling to cover themselves. It will be interesting to see if market share is the only consequence or if any criminal charges, such as slander or fraud, will be leveled.

As usual, you handled the emotional issues delicately. I cooed when reading about Sirius and Harry. It was so easy to see what happened between them in that half an hour without having it spelled out.

Another great job and, even though I must wait for a bit, I look forward to more. Thanks.
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I like how they took the time to explain everything to Remy and Seri instead of just saying, "this is how it is, deal with it" as well as getting their help in things. I think this will help Harry a lot. Also, LOVE Madam Bones. Great job and I can't wait to read more.
person Leania07
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is not a review, just a thank you for your warning. I am a Severus fan, and the fact that you put a warning that this story is NOT for fans of Snape made me close it down before I started reading. Of course, I then opened back up wanting to express my thanks for being so kind to include that warning. I do enjoy some of your other stories, so I'll go find a lovely Snarry fic to enjoy.
Thanks again!

Leania