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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Quiet chapter but it does feel as if it is the eye of the hurricane, that deadly quiet before the storm once again starts raging. I had wondered if Harry would have contact with Neville. Actually, I had wondered if Harry would invite Neville to France if he found out what was happening. Though subtle, I got a feeling of quiet desperation from both Dumbledore and Snape and it will be interesting to see what secrets end up getting revealed.
What I would love to see is a confrontation between Lucius and Fudge where Fudge complains about Lucius not supporting him and Lucius pointing out that he told Fudge to back off but since Fudge didn't heed his advice then, he wasn't going to throw pearls to the swine now.
While McGonagall is getting kudos now, I wonder if it will come out that she was there when Albus left Harry on the doorstep and, even though she saw they were not good people, never bothered to go back to check on Harry or do anything to protest further.
I'm looking forward to the next explosion. Good job and thanks again for taking the time to write this and thanks to your beta for all she does.
What I would love to see is a confrontation between Lucius and Fudge where Fudge complains about Lucius not supporting him and Lucius pointing out that he told Fudge to back off but since Fudge didn't heed his advice then, he wasn't going to throw pearls to the swine now.
While McGonagall is getting kudos now, I wonder if it will come out that she was there when Albus left Harry on the doorstep and, even though she saw they were not good people, never bothered to go back to check on Harry or do anything to protest further.
I'm looking forward to the next explosion. Good job and thanks again for taking the time to write this and thanks to your beta for all she does.
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, lots of progress being made on everything. I am curious to see who Harry accepts mail from and what they say as well as what he thinks of it. Serius is going to love being so free.
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June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and how they are going about revenge. I don't like that harry was raped, but obviously its a main part of the story and you are doing a fantastic job writing about it... i'm mixing my words now lol!
Anyway. Love it. Update soon!
Anyway. Love it. Update soon!
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June 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I normally read the first chapter or two of a new story and if I like it, I make a note and wait till it is finished before reading the rest because I hate wait to get what comes next and I prefer to read it in one shot. For this story I can't. This is one of the very few times when I read each chapter as it comes. Very very good and I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing it.
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June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Snape needs to be dealt with now.
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love this story I can't wait to see how it goes.
I can't wait to see Draco and Harry meet and what is going to happen next.
I can't wait to see Draco and Harry meet and what is going to happen next.
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May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it...esp the mutt
looking forward to the next chapter!
looking forward to the next chapter!
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May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12
Good chapter. It will be interesting to see how Snape reacts to being kicked out of Hogwarts. My guess is that he will be furious (well, that part's not a guess!) and as revenge will plan to spill the beans to Tom about the Order's plan. Can't wait to see THAT meeting, lol!
It's good that Draco finally knows a part of the situation with Harry, but I really hope that sometime in the near future Lucius and/or Tom will have a "talk" with him about the fact that he deliberately ignored their direct orders to quit the Squad. Tom, after all, must be able to trust his followers.
I'm once again having trouble with posting my reviews, so that's all I'll say for now. Looking forward to the next update.
Good chapter. It will be interesting to see how Snape reacts to being kicked out of Hogwarts. My guess is that he will be furious (well, that part's not a guess!) and as revenge will plan to spill the beans to Tom about the Order's plan. Can't wait to see THAT meeting, lol!
It's good that Draco finally knows a part of the situation with Harry, but I really hope that sometime in the near future Lucius and/or Tom will have a "talk" with him about the fact that he deliberately ignored their direct orders to quit the Squad. Tom, after all, must be able to trust his followers.
I'm once again having trouble with posting my reviews, so that's all I'll say for now. Looking forward to the next update.
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May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.
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May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter, the dog was a nice touch. Best dogs ever! I have one sleeping in my daughters nursery becuase I am a very paranoid mother, they really are just massive teddy bears untill something pisses them off then they are very dangerous when it comes to protecting their family.