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person nari-chan
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great work. had a long angry rant but clicked back and deleted it. lol so hate albus, angry at moony, want to kill snape in painful manner and albus for that matter and want everyone to leave harry alone and heal and live a normal life. he is not a pawn in some game he is a child who was abused and raped and was going to the thrown to the wolves to die just because of a meddling old fool has delusions and desires of power and thinks that it would be for some "greater good".
please update soon!
p.s i hope albus pukes from the memories and realizes what a damn monster he is for letting what he did go on.
person paganwoman
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh crape dumbledore has the memories this could present a problem. Or get him killed. Whichever your story is entertaining. Can't wait to see what is in store for snape
person Sara
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great fic so far!
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man.. someone needs to throw Moody into prison. I mean how does a man who dedicated his life to the law kee breaking it and never realizing that he is now the worst sort of criminal?
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Moody's theft is discovered and dealt with. How he can continue to help Dumbledore (and by extension Snape) after viewing one of those memories is beyond me. I wonder how Dumbledore will react to the reality of what Snape did to those innocent children? Will he be sickened enough to help the DMLE catch and punish Snape or will he prove to be equally mentally disturbed as Snape and think nothing of it? I look forward to finding out! Great chapter!!
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Storm is brewing. I cannot wait to hear about Sirius' interview. I was confident Harry's letter would help Neville but I do have a question. Why can't Harry reply to a letter from Neville?

I'm thinking back to the Minister mentioning tracking spells on the memories and I'm wondering what may happen to Dumbledore and Moody for this serious breach?

Good job keeping me going insane wondering what is going to happen next.
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* Can't wait to see what dumbles reactions to the memories are. Why hasn't someone already taken care of Moody?
person autumngold
schedule June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is so brave. It breaks my heart that he had to go through such terror and pain. The fact that Snape and Dumbledore are getting away with it is sad. I don't blame Harry, however, for not going back to England. After the way he was used there, he is safer in France. Thank you for the new chapter! Excellent story!
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love how this story is progressing. I also like how you touch on what is happening back in the UK as well. Not to mention the realistic pace to the progression of Lucius and Harry's relationship. I definitely cannot wait to read more!
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I worry about Harry and wonder if one of Dumbledore's lackeys won't accidently see him and portkey him back to England, even if it will cause an international incident. Dumbledore seems to really getting desperate to get him back. I was hoping you would have an Order meeting or perhaps just a reaction to Bill, Fleur, Tonks and Kingsley sending in their resignations to him letting him know that they won't be doing his dirty work any more. Happy Writing!