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April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whew! This is HOT! Not only is the idea of forced obedience really exceptional, your ability to describe Hermione's conflicting thoughts and feelings is great! Please continue to update...quickly. I feel I'm as hot and bothered as Hermione! xoxo SM
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March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update more of this story
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March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am in love wit this story do far. I want to see how far you take it.
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Obsessed with this story. Very well written, the best I've seen in ages :)
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March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update more...This is a really good story and it is an original ideal...
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March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I'm loving this! Creepy and erotic at once!
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March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, very original idea and very hot. I like how Hermione is still her strong willed self and not a submissive husk of a character. It would be nice to see her eventually turn the tables on him. Please don't wait so long to post the next chapter. Thanks <3
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March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and I think you've done an excellent job conveying the confusion going through Hermione's mind because of all this. Some more introspection in the next chapter wouldn't go amiss, though, as it seems to be more of a passing thought, rather than taking over her every waking thought!
I don't know where you're going with the storyline where Harry notices, but you've done a good job so far so I trust you! The compulsion to beg you to update more often is there, but I'll try to contain myself!
Generally I love it. I think you've captured Draco well, and even if he is still completely made up of a little black heart, there's glimmers of good in him that you're hinting at subtly, which is nice.
Thank you for this story. It's new, interesting and really hot, so I look forward to the next installment!
(sorry for the bitty review as well - I haven't done this in a long time, but I felt compelled!)
I don't know where you're going with the storyline where Harry notices, but you've done a good job so far so I trust you! The compulsion to beg you to update more often is there, but I'll try to contain myself!
Generally I love it. I think you've captured Draco well, and even if he is still completely made up of a little black heart, there's glimmers of good in him that you're hinting at subtly, which is nice.
Thank you for this story. It's new, interesting and really hot, so I look forward to the next installment!
(sorry for the bitty review as well - I haven't done this in a long time, but I felt compelled!)
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Look forward to reading more. So far it is really good!
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am so happy for another chapter *doing happy dance*. This story has ENDLESS possibilities, very, very naughty possibilities!!!!
Draco is so Slytherin...his commands that make Hermione 'enjoy herself'. The Oral Sex scene was PRICELESS! I wish I could have someone forbid me gag...what a handy talent that would be *wink, wink*.
I am so looking forward to plenty *hint, hint* of chapters to explore this situation!?!?!?!?!?!
More, Please!!!!
Draco is so Slytherin...his commands that make Hermione 'enjoy herself'. The Oral Sex scene was PRICELESS! I wish I could have someone forbid me gag...what a handy talent that would be *wink, wink*.
I am so looking forward to plenty *hint, hint* of chapters to explore this situation!?!?!?!?!?!
More, Please!!!!