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for Pareo: Obey

by kateofallpeople

person Siona_the_Green
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so quickly! This was a great chapter. So hot that Draco lost control of himself. Can't wait to see what happens next
person Jacqui
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Hope for lots more updates!! And good work on the smut, keep it coming.
person Update
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's brilliant, please update more frequently though, we want to see where this goes
person anonymous
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was intense!
person Siona_the_Green
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! Please don't make us wait so long for an update. And it woul be cool if Draco took interest in her more than just for sex. I don't know if you can pull off a romantic yet manipulative blackmailing Draco but it would be great! Thanks for sharing :)
person No seriously
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You're four chapters in and this is amazing. Please don't be one of those crappy inconsiderate authors who takes forever to update. Please know that we live your work and deserve updates. There is nothing more frustrating that trying out a WIP and having the author not care. Please update when you can its awesome!
person anaidra
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Well, think it will be very interesting to see what Draco has planned to teach Hermione and how she will take it :). Please keep going!
person Aranel
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is my little gem! All my usual stories aren't being updated as fast as I would like but this one just made my day. I think I've read it three times now! Just the right amount of drawn out torture, dubious consent, and cheating on Ron Weasley(my favorite pass time for hermione)! Loving this story, feed my habit smutty pusher man! Can't wait till the next chapter. Gonna go shake down some old stories to get my fix till the next update.
person EndlessDarkDramieoneDesire
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loving the direction of the story going.. Eagerly waiting for the next Chapter.. Update Soon.. :)
person lamiko
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow =) , i really like the way this story is written, cannot wait to see the next chapter =)))))

Marie