rate_review Reviews

I definitely did like Draco's 'watch me' attitude lol. Better hurry Harry... Draco is moving along without you!

I think Draco should just ignore Harry. One, he's incredibly unhelpful now, since he's being so irrational. Two, he's probably going to go dim again, and how is that going to help out at all? And three, it will piss the Boy Wonder off and maybe make him wake up even more. And Harry's denial about telling Draco or how utterly stupid he was when Draco first showed up would be cute if he didn't have a wand pointed at my favourite Blondie. Not happy with that one, by the by.

Oh, and the way that Draco handled the dog? I loved it! Brill!

Draco is an idiot to be doing this just to cure boredom. I'm hoping he gets a big bite on the ass.

Still reading. Next chapter please. I want to get rid of the dog & get another piece of Harry's heart back. See how he acts then.

about #5...

1. No, not a needle in a haystack.. :-) like you had mentioned what this
story was based on the myth about Koschei, who had hid 'his ''soul'' in a needle, in a
egg, in a duck, in a hare, etc... bottom line it was 6 things. So I thought you
would base your story on that but with changes to what Harry's ''heart'' was hidden
in.

Therefore, I thought you would play upon the part about the needle, but from what I'm seeing
you have a different idea on how you're going to do this.

That's all, got it?

Despite all that, you got yourself an interesting story here.

Yes, and we can always count on Draco for enthusiasm in telling Harry how utterly stupid he's being. And seeing this little part of the drama, I'd say he has every right. Ugh, lifeless Harry with the frog...I wanted to punch him. So, I can only image what Draco felt. And the dog, so not cool. Draco is going to deserve so MUCH after freeing Harry from this spell.

I think this is one of my favorite chapters I have read of any of your stories. I really like dry humor and this one had several spots that I just found hilarious. When Harry was like 'oh yeah, it (the bird) will defend itself' and Draco thinking there weren't words to describe what he thought of that lol. Also when Harry didn't tell Draco the bird could break magic 'because you didn't ask me' and when Draco asked what else the bird can do and Harry said 'I don't think I want to tell you.' Those lines are freakin' priceless and I totally loved them. Very very awesome chapter :)

I'm a little late to the party this time, but I'd prefer to think of it as fashionably late. This story is going to be *fun*. I can already tell. Draco's boredom is as good a reason for him to want to help Harry as anything else I suppose. Who else was going to tell Harry just how utterly stupid he was in performing this ritual? And Narcissa and Lucius can't complain that Draco is annoying them with his whinging now. =P I look forward to the next chapter!

Hahah you never know what you've missed until its gone. Ace. I love this story. I have enjoyed all of your stories (tho i think the one i dont read is the House that Lovers built or something like that) and i love your writing style.

Cant wait to see what happens next and what the next creature will do (and how itll try to kill Draco) :D

about #4..

I forgot that this would possibly have 5 or 6 trials in it. But, each
one shouldn't be that hard right?