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for A Black Stone in a Glass Box

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Harry & Draco are going together to fight something. Maybe this next chapter will see them becoming more of a team if not a couple.
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That chapter was AWESOME. I can totally imagine the manic grin Draco had too, much like my own right now if the looks im getting are anything to go by.

Hehe as usual I love all your stuff. Will wait for the next to appear. :D
person SParker
schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #8..

1. That was funny! Harry looking like 'a beetle' trying to fly
with those wings. :-) I would have crashed laughing at him!

2. Moutain skimming??? Is that the sport when crazed individuals
put on those suits and fly down the side of the mountain at breakneck
speed...and sometimes break their legs when they don't have enough altitude?

Please tell me you haven't done that....
schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh my freakin' gosh that chapter was hilarious! I just laughed and laughed over the picture you painted of Harry flopping around like a turtle on its back when he couldn't get those wings to work. And I loved that line where Harry asks Draco if his parents convinced him to come home and they should send him back. Draco's thoughts were just so funny. Loved loved loved this chapter!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading each chapter as they come up. Kind of waiting for more personal interaction between Harry & Draco. So far we are doing a lot of flying around with Harry madly yelling at Draco about leaving him be (which if Draco did it would totally block the real Harry).
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Haha loving that horse and the little wings that made Draco and Harry fly :)

Looking forward to the next one, and how Draco is gonna get to the end without Harry stopping him somehow.
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy the chase and the fighting and the eventual taming that Draco had to go through with the horse. And Harry's attitude. I'm with Draco that it's hot....

That's four down. Three more to go, right?
person SParker
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #7..

That was actually fun, with some excitement thrown in! :-)

Without a doubt, Draco Malfoy makes the story, he absolutely shines in
this with his carefree ways & his search for excitement...much to the
chagrin of Harry. Hah!

It's good to see you do a complete 180 on Draco's character where he isn't
solemn or brooding or too serious about a situation.

Also, nice ending here. Good job dear. :-)
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love that each time i started a new chapter in this that my Harry Potter sound track came on. It is absolutely fantastic, but i'm slightly worried about how Harry will react when this comes to an end.
person delia cerrano
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying it. Wish Draco would give Harry a clue that it isn't just to bug him that Draco wants to get the parts back.