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for A Black Stone in a Glass Box

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I especially liked this chapter. I guess because there was more talking & intimacy between Draco & Harry. Draco does for Harry what his friends & others can't or don't do. He backs him, explains to him not down to him, he tells it like it is ...not expecting self sacrifice. Drco is loving in a supportive but not smothering or babying way.
person SP777
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #18..

Well heck...I think that's a great idea! Draco as an unofficial agent.
It would like having a job, but he won't get paid for it....pity.

Besides i think he would do good for undercover espionage. Helping Harry
with the tougher cases that require...questionable means. What do you think?
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Haha I love this story!!!!!!!! It makes me smile and laugh and everything in between.
person polka dot
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its ashame the pictures took a walk, I'm sure they would have had some interesting commentary.
person delia cerrano
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yea Draco! Keep going, especially the kissing, and you'll get through to Harry yet.
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... someone staring while I was eating would make me wonder if they could hear me chewing and swallowing... very self-conscious lol. I loved Draco's dad asking all calm and serious what Harry Potter was doing at their table. Had to laugh over that one :)
person delia cerrano
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chaps 14-16: I'm liking it better now that there more talking at least between Harry & Draco. Looks like the tide has turned and maybe Harry is begining to get what Draco has been trying to tell him. Lucius is something else! Real Lord of the manor.
person SP777
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #16...

Hey, if I knew all the people who read my stories in real life, no way would I dare do that.
Oh, you wound me...and how long have we've been corresponding? 4 years now...?

...and I agree with Harry. Lucius was a bit on the calm side...not that I'm complaining. By the way,
when are you going to update your author's profile???
schedule March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whahahah I doubt Draco is gonna have his throat ripped out but that was such a cliffhanger place to stop. Cant wait to see what Harry will do. Least they are kinda getting on now :)
person SP777
schedule March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #14...

I love an author who lives dangerously...and just ends the chapter
like they just did, at the expense of endangering themselves against
the pitchforks, stakes, whips, chains...etc that could come for them.

:-)