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for A Black Stone in a Glass Box

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ha, either I was slow at reading this time or you were super fast updatey but that was like two chapters in a few days. I love that xD

this chapter was nice, i like the way that Draco slowly draws Harry's attention and affection. Most stories just rush in, i like that most of yours dont (unless they are intended to of course)
person SP777
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know Louis is a past lover, it's just that he gets so much mentioning, I'm tempted
to ask, could we get a side story with Draco & Louis or better yet....can we meet the
infamous Louis, though Harry doesn't know how often Draco thinks of him offhandedly.

Anyway, this was a nice downtime for the both of them.
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Haha excellent. I would miss the eyebrow otherwise.

Nice chapter, love the banter between the too, and the throwing in of the HP world creature of darkness and death (even if just in comparison to the cloak)

look forward to the next one as always. :)
person delia cerrano
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good I'm glad the pink leopard & silver cloak are gone! Also liked Harry & Draco getting along better and showing that they cared for each other.
person SP777
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about#20....

1. Who in the bleeding hell is Louis??!!??

2. Draco...casting..cleaning charms...as he is fighting a pink
leopard....in a filthy swamp. O_o

Hahahaha!!!

3. Say...do you make up the scenarios as you go along in the story or do you have
them plotted out already? Because an exotic beach would be a nice change at this point.
person polka dot
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the pink leopard and frankly I think Draco doth protest too much about it.
person Polka dot
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Pink Leopards awesome
schedule April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee Harry might drown!!! (though i doubt it, its nice to pretend lol)

I love the title of this chapter, and could just imagine Draco raising a blond brow at the "pink" lepoard hehehe.
person delia cerrano
schedule April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Pink leopard? Really? Pink? Haha Like the slowly getting closer feeling I get between Harry & Draco.
person SP777
schedule April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #19..

Oooo...suspense...suspenseful! Sometimes I wonder, if Draco knew
what was going to happen the rest of the day as soon as he wakes up,
would he even try to do these suicidal missions.

I Like a coy Draco as well as one who can't stand having his tailored made
robes ruined. :-D

...and now we have Harry doing what he does best, being in danger. Harry definitely
makes a career out of it.

By the way, do you watch Game of Thrones? I find it interesting, especially Daenerys,
who has become a fav behind Tyrion.