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for A Black Stone in a Glass Box

by Lomonaaeren

person Polka dot
schedule June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Harry has never been the brightest. He has always needed hermione's help. Brains over brawn.
person SP777
schedule May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #24...

Well now, I can honestly say I didn't see THAT one coming in!
person delia cerrano
schedule May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow the last bit will be the hardest huh?
person Polka dot
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry he is really incompetent in this Fic.
person SP777
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #23..

Heyyy, you did the beach theme! :-)
...and you picked a favorite color of mine here.

Hmph...I don't see what is SO difficult about spearing 'Charlie', just
take the rose and stick it where it counts. O__O ...and you're done. :-)

Oh, and the subtle flirtations between them works out very well here.

By the way, how many tasks do they have left?
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww this chapter was cute :)

And yay to Draco for not actually caring abut money, and being smart enough to now Lucius woulnt disinherit him.

And PG-13, is it? Hahaha, I didnt even look, i tend to just read all your stuff. But that does make it a more sweet story
person SP777
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #22...

You know, this chapter almost had a feeling of a conversation similar to
''Why?..Because?..Why?..Because?..'', when a child annoys the parent. On purpose.
Good to know, Draco won't bend easily.
person delia cerrano
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Only kissing in this story? Just kissing? Well I have a good imagination & you might give some hints like the old movies.
Or you could change the rating. Any way I never thought he would so easily defy Lucius. Glad, but didn't think he'd do it.
What's wrong with Harry anyway? He is the wizarding crown prince...handsome, filthy rich, and tons of fame also one if not the most powerful wizards in the world.
person alexkdp
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WHAT YOU LEFT IT THERE???? just as things were starting to get steamy too. *sigh*
i like how much interaction is between draco and harry, and harry being rather vulnerable. very appealing. but then again, you're a very appealing writer. so it is only to be expected ;)
person delia cerrano
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just reading, just enjoying - hoping Draco can wriggle into Harry's life.