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January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say, this sounds interesting so far. Though I am a bit surprised that Hermione did not tell Narcissa why exactly she was there. In a time like that, it is nice to have someone who knows, and I can see Narcissa understanding and being supportive of her. Plus, she might be able to give advice on the "leaving him" part. I look forward to more.
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January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome hun! I am glad I was able to help. Thank you for putting some back story in there about how they knew each other, that was very helpful. I liked the twist that Narcissa had been cheated on as well, it gives them common ground. Man is ickle Ronnikins in for a shock when everything in the house is gone XD He is just going to "LOVE" how utterly SOL he is. Are Hermione and Draco still friends even after the rivalry? I mean, they are both brilliant, so I can't ever see them not having at least a small rivalry together, but from the sounds of it, rivalry aside, they were trying to keep each other and their families safe. Can't wait till Harry finds out, he will blow a gasket at Ron...at least that is how Harry strikes me, the weasleys too. Who knows though, maybe your version they all take Ron's side...though I never could see the twins doing that.
ANYWAYS, long story short, looking forward to more, this is great ^^
ANYWAYS, long story short, looking forward to more, this is great ^^
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January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good chapters. cant wait to read more, please update soon.