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by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

person DB1
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@21. Me thinks hermione might be pregnant. Update soon

DB
person Annie
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. I assume the story is headed towards a pregnant Hermione storyline. Is it wrong that a large part of me wants Remus to be the new daddy?
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, now two people know lol. I hope Hermione finds out soon before something happens. I also hope Sev isn't mad at her. I mean, it takes two..Nice to see Tonks is still the tough little thing that she is. I almost feel sorry for that man...almost lol Can't wait to read more!
person Snow Queen
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the "Remus' Memory" chapter. It was really well-done and you wrote Remus and Tonks beautifully. You should consider writing a Remus/Tonks story in the future since you write them brilliantly and you managed to maintain the spirit of both characters in your writing.

I'm also pleased to see the progress of Snape and Hermione's relationship. I'm now eagerly waiting to see how they'll both react to their shared news. It's also very amusing to read about how some of the people who are close to them either suspect or have figured out the source of Hermione's illness. I

Keep up the great writing. Also, thank you for giving us peeks into the relationships of the other characters, since I find that it keeps things interesting in your story.
person April
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story! I wonder who Ron will react to Serverus claiming Hermione publicly.
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Did you make Hermione pregnant? That is the only thing I can think of for her sickness lol. I think Molly knows too...anyways, I'm glad Sev is willing to talk to her! So much was announced at dinner geeze, It's a wonder they aren't all drunk off their ass lol. Can't wait to read more!
person Bawetta
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Somebody forgot about contaception? ;-)
Great story, keep going. Maybe another bit of HG/SS/LM?
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! I wonder who will figure it out first. lol Thanks! HG4eva
schedule March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I am glad that Remus and Tonks are able to move on and be stronger for it together. Tonks must really love him to go through all that.
person Crimsonfoxx
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what's going on, but stay positive!! We, the readers stand behind you. You have given us a real gift with this story and you are doing a wonderful job. People who are negative have either nothing better to do in life or they are miserable sods that must get some sick pleasure out of trying to make everyone else unhappy. Keep your head held high, you are so very talented. All the best to you! -Crimson.