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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice update! I was moved by his crying, but disheartened by his lack of care for his son. :-( I hope one day he understands how awful that was to say. Thanks! HG4eva
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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First off, I think a sequel would be a great idea. It's like a second chapter of their lives. Second, poor Sev, I think what he needs right now is a lot of comfort and reassurance about both Hermione and the child. Though I think it should happen fairly fast as the first few days/months are very important for a baby when it comes to it's parents. Well, the first years as well, but that is beside the point. I liked the explanation of the Malfoy line as well as how Veela's came into existence and evolved. I can't wait to read more!
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"May be a sad one?"
I'm not saying anything until I read the next chapter, I "may" forgive you and I "may" not.
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I'm not saying anything until I read the next chapter, I "may" forgive you and I "may" not.
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*throws a cookie at you* Yes, that is n evil spot to end lol. Can't wait to read more!
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the lack of reviews, but it's hard to do when reading on your phone. I am still reading and enjoying. I love his nerves, his love, and his loss of composure. And, I loved his instant proposal. They are simply lovely. :-) I em also really enjoying the friendship of Tonks, Narcissa and Hermione. Thank you! HG4eva
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved these last two chapters! The slice-of-life feel of them worked well and I loved the conversations between Hermione, Narcissa, and Tonks.
I'm very happy to see that Snape finally proposed to Hermione, since it was about time he did that. I'm looking forward to your next update.
I'm very happy to see that Snape finally proposed to Hermione, since it was about time he did that. I'm looking forward to your next update.
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So glad he did and I love his conversation with Remus and Lucius.
I am surprised at Lucius and hope that he doesn't make Draco uncomfortable. A child is still your child no matter what. Unconditional love should not just be for your dogs.
Thanks for the update. :D
I am surprised at Lucius and hope that he doesn't make Draco uncomfortable. A child is still your child no matter what. Unconditional love should not just be for your dogs.
Thanks for the update. :D
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March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think Sev handled that better then I would. I would have either a heart attack or killed someone for just messing with everything like that without even asking XD Great chapter!
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March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hormonal Hermione, watch out! She has certainly taken over. LOL
I can understand poor Severus needing a moment to catch his breath, the middle of the night and in-between classes is a bit much. It is a wonder the man still has the strength to walk.
She was definitely out of control though, changing every room and putting things where she wanted them without even consulting him was way out of line.
I can understand poor Severus needing a moment to catch his breath, the middle of the night and in-between classes is a bit much. It is a wonder the man still has the strength to walk.
She was definitely out of control though, changing every room and putting things where she wanted them without even consulting him was way out of line.
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March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@26. I hate when ppl use sex as a means to get their partner to agree to things. Not fair. Great chapter though. Update soon
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