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by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

schedule January 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*dumps a pile of slugs on Ginny's head* Mean little thing isn't she. Sheesh. With luck, Hermione will be one of those girls where it doesn't really hurt, just feels uncomfortable for a minute.

Anyways, great chapter. I love how you are getting Luna involved. She is such a fun character. Hermione sure has an A list group of guys wanting her, not that I can blame them, she's a great character after all. It's nice to see that Sev has a softer side, but I found Hermione's sneering comment about Angelina to be rather well, it definitely did not seem like her. I could see it if maybe it was Lavender, but not Angelina since as far as I know, they never had any problems with each other. Can't wait to read more, and congrats on still having your net! ^^
person Cat
schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woot for Snape! Tho I want Lucius to be her sugar daddy why do I feel like Sev wont want to give her up. Can't wait to read more and see what Ginny has to tell her.
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You are easily my favourite fanfic author! Totally addicted to your stories. Please update as soon as possible!!!!!
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think Sev should. Simply for the fact that she trusts him. Plus, if you plan on making this a sev/mione story then it would give them a starting place. Plus that way they can avoid anyone being mad as well. After all, if she picks Remus then Lucius could be all butthurt and claim she was playing favorites in a sense. If she picks Lucius I could see that as a blow to Remy's confidence. Where as Sev is more neutral. Plus there is the fact that Lucius is an intimidating man with probably one heck of a rep. That would be terrifying on a first time.

I can see Ginny getting jealous later on when Hermione becomes the new fav...Either way, this looks very interesting and definitely has a nice twist. I can not wait to read more.
person Cat
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is great, funny and interesting. I'd vote Sev, she seems to trust him and it would allow him to teach her the business so to say plus if she chose Remus he'd get far to attached and Lucius well as fun as that would be it would take away from the S/H main ship tho that could strike the jealous Sev and add another level to the story. Anyway I hope you say who a few more of his girls are, I can see them all getting jealous of how Hermione is treated especially Ginny since she already bragged about getting things. I've read your other stories and found it funny this was a whore story compared to the L/H one but it just seems like such a fun idea. Can't wait to read more
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving this!!!!!! Also, I have to agree with the previous rfeviews and state that logically and thematically, having Severus as her first makes sense and helps the story along. Please keep the updates coming!!!
person Nathoca
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LUCIUS!!!
If she's gonna be his suggar baby, than, let him beggin. It's reasonal and I think she would think like that. Beisdes, Lucius has been waiting for her. I wouldn't like the idea of haveing someone having sex with someone polyjuiced as me. It's strange.
And please, update soon. I liked the begining.
Kisses.
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would say for her virginity all 3 on consecutive days or dates. She will still be inexperienced and innocent. With a numbing salve for the pain as Severus takes care of his girls. Lucius as the first to seduce, Remus to show her how he would worship her, and Snape for the passion. Hmmmm.
person Nathoca
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
But well... as I read the other coments, I realise must agree with them. SNAPE would be a nice choice also. Beacuse she trusts him. But not Remus. No way. I already said why. It would be strange.
Kisses.
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know I want Severus to be her first!!! hahah great start! I haven't seen you around, how are ya? How are the holidays?