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for Snapes Girls *Complete*

by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

person runaway
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next one. I imagine Snape would totally be in spy/stalker mode when Hermione goes on her dates. Lol
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, talk about taking the bull by the horns XD Well, that's our girl at least lol. Sev, you are one lucky guy and don't you ever forget it XD I can not wait to see how she interacts with Lucius, should be interesting. What was he reading that was so embarrassing btw?
person Alyssa
schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please write more!!
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
schedule January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting chapter. Poor Sev, that was harder on him then expected, though I did catch him calling her "love." So sweet. The bit at the end about Luna polyjuicing herself was just funny XD Can't wait to read more!
person anyesha
schedule January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really dont get where exactly severus is going ......its too confusing please give some more details.........love the idea that sev lost it when he is with hermione,............but i really dont want hermione with lucious SERIOUSLYY
schedule January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! it's well written and I'm looking forward to reading more :) Wish I could save the stories I like to make it easier.
person DB1
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@3. Oh my god so hot. Update soon.

DB
person Cat
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was good you broke it up, it felt like a good stopping point; however, I do wish there was more ready to read. Hope we get to see into Sev's head through this too.
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You are brilliants- please, please PLEASE may we have some (lots) more????