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for Snapes Girls *Complete*

by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for going with Snape :D
person Cat
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great, as per usual. Sev may just have a heart attack if this keeps up.....keep him safe ;)
person guiltypleasure
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is so, so very good. I feel so bad for Severus but he should have never taken some of her memories from the night before. I am glad that he told Luna and that Luna is actually one smart cookie. She will make him see that they really do belong together.

Wow Ginny, what a bitch. Was that really necessary?

I don't want her to go to Lucius, I hope that Severus stops her before Lucius takes her.
person guiltypleasure
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So, so glad that Lucius was the perfect gentleman and it was Hermione who controlled the situation.

It would be sad indeed if she actually fell for the guy when there is our oh so wonderful potions master.

I am looking forward to some interaction between S & H now that her first job is over. I wonder who she will be set up with next.

Ok Luna, lets keep our main focus on how to get those two together
person colao
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is delicious, thanks for sharing!
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
...*falls over laughing* Twilight! *shudders and resumes laughing* I was afraid of that lol. Hopefully Lucy has more sense then those silly students. This was a nice, sweet little chapter. Poor Sev, he is going to go gray worrying about her. Can't wait to read more!
person DB1
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@6 yummy chapter. Please update soon can't wait to read more!

DB
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
EEks. I am enjoying this a lot. Good work. :)
person Cat
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great as usual. Lucius is ever the smart one isn't he? will he be the one to push Sev into admitting to Hermione he doesnt want her with others? Or possibly hint to her how Sev feels after he's had some fun? Can't wait to see what you have in store for this.
person DB1
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@5 update update!

DB