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I am so, so jealous.

He whispered he thinks he loves her

Aw, what a sweet chapter! I am glad they are getting along so well, and that Sev is finally relaxing. I hope the rest of their vacation goes well also, they both really need it. Looking forward to more as always!

WHAT IS GOING ON???? why cant i access this story that i started reading last night?? i have read much more explist stuff harry potter fan fiction hermione and severus stories on here than this and it wasnt removed so why is this story removed??? thats NOT fair!!! please fix this problem because i would like to continou reading it!!!

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what the HELL!!!! that doesnt sound right rumeus having sex with a polyjuiced her? surely that would be severus after this IS a severus and hermione story and another thing that doesnt sound right is that malfoy gy wanting her and another thing more importantly is the part where hermione said she would sell her body for sex i would never do that even if i was hard up on money!! and it doent sound like something hermione would do!!! poor hermione

i love severus is so lovely!!!!

what about contraception against pregnancies then luna wont have to talk to mothers about unplanned AND unwanted pregnantcy!!! there is no mentions about protection against that?? and more importantly what about protection against STD's (AIDS, HIV and etc) even wizards witches can get those??

i mean USE YOUR BRAIN people!!!!!

also is severus in love with hermione?? and vise versa??

is he in love with hermione because hermione reminds him of his first love Lilly Evens?? also if severus is in love with hermione how is he going to handel other men fucking etc her??

Luna-

I have made a complete arse of myself. I cried and allowed myself to be held by Hermione. I didn

Aw! Hermione is such a sweetheart! Bet no one else ever gave them gifts for no real reason like that. Hope they have fun on their vaca. Also, I LOVE you. What you have chosen for Gin is just...perfect! XD Little brat needs to learn her place. I don't know why, but I find the idea of Molly being one of his girls back in the day as amusing, thus it would take the thunder out of Gins sails if she did tell her, and get her in a lot of trouble...but I think Molly might have been too old at the time. Either way, looking forward to more!

@7 update update!!! I really like this story can't wait to read more!!

DB

Quite the little sex kitten indeed.

I love the fact that he asked her to go and she is actually going with him. Yay!

Oh Severus in a bathing suit, lying on the beach blanket with Hermione protecting his delicate skin by being on top of him. (blush)