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for For The Sake Of A Name

by Bickymonster

person nari-chan
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great update:) glad that inspection went well and taking him to the party was cool. glad they were mindful of his presence and settled down some. ron was mildly amusing, and draco just glaring at eanyone who touched her son or made silly comments was my favorite part. please update again soon
person ChaosLady
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Baby Orion IS cute!
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I guess you have a point, years of torment is hard to forget.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
And I was sooo sure that the Ministry of childrens services (or whatever) was going to show up at the exams party and try to get them for taking the baby to an inappropriate party (drinking, loud noise, bad behavior).
person nari-chan
schedule June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow, that inspector is dissecting them like a high school bio class on frog day. he was well paid,that im sure off by Lucius to see everything that is "wrong"? and even twist what was right into wrong. i hope that having the headmaster there helped them a little bit. and i defiantly hope that things go well with the report and inspection.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Boy, Lucius is just determined. If he were to get Orion shouldn't the Ministry watch him to see that he is taking good care of the baby and not just shoving him off on servants? Could they get the newspapers to be on their side? You know...look what's happening to The Boy Who Saved the World and his baby!
schedule June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, I might be willing to give Draco first dibs being the mom and all, but I call age over Harry XD Either way, great chapter. I love how the are working together and honestly, Sev should be glaring at the other guy, not Seri right now lol. Direct some of that scary potions master stuff to the bad guy! Make 'im think twice. Can't wait to read more.
person Gruffard
schedule June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't like this guy. He is a jerk.

A solid chapter, learned a few things about how the couple is changing, but I think these chapters leading up to summer break will be interesting. I know Lucy is going to do something the question is what and why. And probably how obvious.

Thanks for the read. Good setup chapter. Looking forward to next week.
person ChaosLady
schedule June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More cuteness with baby Orion! Mr. Blishwick is an idiot. Harry Potter has friends in high places (Dumbledore!). Excellent update!
person delia cerrano
schedule June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now that the baby is here, I started thinking back...boy have Harry & Draco changed since the story started! More than just Draco turning into a girl. They both seem to have gotten more serious...mature...in their relationship. Like it's for real and all time not a boyfriend/girlfriend thing. They are buckling down and figuring out how to handle things for the baby and their future. Not just going with flow or waiting till it happens to think about it. Sirius is shaping into quite the respectible grandfather. Hope it hasn't killed all the wild maurader out of him. As far as Pansy? I think she will just get more sneaky when she sees that they have tried to spike her guns by getting the professors and her dad involved. Hope we read more of the snarky Snape and Harry/Draco and the baby. There was a story on fanfiction re Sev raising Harry as a baby and a toddler...grabbing Sev's robes and being pulled along as he worked on his potions...hysterical stuff.. supported them making potions for people...great story don't think it was ever finished. That was looong ago though.