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WHAT IS FUCKING HAPPENING XD

This is NOT what I expected for a 5the year story so far XD pregnancy already omg 

Just caught up on this story, really loving how it is going! Please continue writing!

I would also b like to be included in notification list for the book For the sake of name ..... Waiting to read the rest of the chapters ...

hope Draco is ok with the meeting with Umbrige ....pls. someone needs to do something to Malfoy Sr. Thanks for the update !!!!!!!!

Glad to read another piece of this story. Real life does interfer doesn't it? Good chapter. Draco/ Harry & Orion are so cute together! I thought Sirius and Remus were bi-sexual at least and were together when they reached their late teen years or twenties. That Umbridge really needs help...out of town or out of life!!

Y'know, for a smut site this is quite the different story. Good different, mind you. Lack of Voldemort doesn't really damage the writing at all, if anything it makes it better in this case. I do have to slightly dislike your portrayal of Remus, but that's due in part to the idea that he will at least do the right thing when his head's on straight. I don't think it would happen like what was written, but very minor point. Malfoy's slightly OOC for what I've read, but then again this is fan's fiction, and thus he can be as big a bastard or as nice as Ghandi as you want him to be. I appreciate the idea that Narcissa is still the main one to show complete concern for Draco, though.

Hilarious how quickly and easily Harry and Draco love each other, but at the same time as teens and having known each other rather well over the years (mostly in an antagonistic fashion, granted) it makes sense they'd know each other easier. Likewise, spending all their time together almost makes it far easier too, along with him being the one to pull a now-her out of the gutter. I don't know why though, but I've been fascinated by genderbends lately...anyways! Thanks for writing. Hope to see another chapter soon.

If you wouldn't mind updating me as well? halonoah94@aim.com, please.

Glad to see bridges being mended. Although I felt like that only delayed the big story floating over us with Umbridge/Lucy.

I wonder if Snape and Narcissa are able to get a child safely to term if Orion will be off the hook. I fear that is wishful thinking at best.

Fudge, think for himself? Hah. That silly. That breaks all the fan fiction tropes of his personality. He is the classic Figurehead. Either way, thanks for the update. Glad to see it continued.

Sirius is taking it harder then I expected. Remus is classically Depressed, so his isolation was expected. Sirius surprised me, but I hope his mood doesn't wreck things for the Potters.

I hope the Minister doesn't do anything stupid... who am I kidding? His last name is Fudge! ;) Short but sweet.

Hey. Great to see the story being continued. Solid and heavy chapter. Too bad the event with Remus did not go well.

What I am looking forward to is seeing what side Fudge takes. Maybe he will support Child Services and the Potters. Be great if he isn't Lucius' errand boy in this story.

PS: I didn't get an email. Curious if I got dropped off it. Although I don't follow your Erote story, I do like this one. Good luck with your muses for the other story though.