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for A Slave For You

by cris2747

person alf
schedule April 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
¿como termina?
person anthony
schedule December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good hope for more
person D.Mntz
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn. This was crazy sexy and well written! I cant wait for you to continue this story! Amazing job!
person Sirene
schedule August 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The ideas are great, the writing on the other hand is very lacking in grabbing my attention. I did like the intro, however I as a reader I don't need the little imputs from the author such as "She hated the fact (or so she tells herself)" or "(because like I said she won't admit that she revealed in the pain.)" and somewhere along the way I just stopped reading. I did try to read it though.
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found the newest chapter!! Happy, happy, joy, joy.

I really do love this Dark Fluer!

More, please!
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, totally missed this story and loved this chapter.

Fleur laughed, "So I am your first, good. I shall take all your virginities as it should be, being your mate."


soooooooooooooooooooooo does that mean there might be anal in the future? :D

This site needs more Dominant/sub fem-slash stories, and I love how you portray Fleur and I hope this is going to be a long story and continues even after Hermione gives in.
person Kain
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To the reviewer called Jordan......you just made shit uncomfortable
person Jordan
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is how my rape felt. Forced i was not beatten or chained bt none the less forced into submissiveness begging my body to be less of the whore i am, if just this once. Needless to say the cops did nothing because i became submissive instead of getting beat half to death. You dont understand how much it helps having someone put the feelings into words
person Mark's Pet
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say that Fem-slash does not normally get my attention. But the summary peaked my curiosity.

OMG, that was HOT!!! Once I got past the accent, which is always hard to read; I fell in LOVE with this story.

I am glad that you took an attempt at Harry Potter. I am dule impressed.

I have only one thing left to say. More, please!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
person Kain
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yes..yes.yes,yes,YES,YES!!!!(continues Daniel Bryan 'yes' chant)

this was simply perfect. I have been waiting a long time for someone to write something like this. This was very hot and very dark, I absolutely adore stories where either Fleur,Narcissa or Bellatrix are total dominants and Hermione is the reluctant submissive that eventually gives into one of them. You have gone that extra mile and put all 3 of them in here to tame poor Hermione. Love the characterizations you have given them and glad that Hermione doesn't break too easily. Keep up the good work, I am very interested in seeing where this goes.

-waits patiently for next update-