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January 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM
That's as very good.
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January 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to thank delia cerrano for the review. I wanted to put this up as I was curious as to just what 'begats' was to mean in reference to my story?
I have to admit that it has me confused. Also the fact that I had to look it up. The only thing I have come across was in connection to the bible
(which I still don't understand as I haven't read any bible).
I will explain my idea behind this story for everyone that is confused or curious, my point was to show just how different the world was because of the curse.
It was also to show how everyone moved on from the revelations of the curse. Also how different the world was in truth.
I will agree that this story is weird. Most of mine are as, I dream up most of them. What can I say? It's how I work. Have fun reading and writing everyone.
I have to admit that it has me confused. Also the fact that I had to look it up. The only thing I have come across was in connection to the bible
(which I still don't understand as I haven't read any bible).
I will explain my idea behind this story for everyone that is confused or curious, my point was to show just how different the world was because of the curse.
It was also to show how everyone moved on from the revelations of the curse. Also how different the world was in truth.
I will agree that this story is weird. Most of mine are as, I dream up most of them. What can I say? It's how I work. Have fun reading and writing everyone.
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January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It was like reading the begats but it was interesting.
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January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1
After reading the first chapter, I can see the title of this story is appropriate, as I have no idea WTH is going on! :-D Hopefully things will get clearer as I keep reading.
Oh yes, you don't need an apostrophe for plurals that aren't possessive. So "Dad's" is incorrect the way you've been using it. It should be "Where are my Dads?"
After reading the first chapter, I can see the title of this story is appropriate, as I have no idea WTH is going on! :-D Hopefully things will get clearer as I keep reading.
Oh yes, you don't need an apostrophe for plurals that aren't possessive. So "Dad's" is incorrect the way you've been using it. It should be "Where are my Dads?"
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January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5
"The Great Hall had a lot more students in it then before since all the people that were dead in the cursed life, were alive and had kids."
Okay. . . . How exactly did that work?
"The Great Hall had a lot more students in it then before since all the people that were dead in the cursed life, were alive and had kids."
Okay. . . . How exactly did that work?
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So cute and so Hot !!!!!! love the twist you put into the story !!!!! hope their is more to it
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January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That's what I say: What the hell is going on! It was confusing with all the new & old matchs & what really happened, what they thought happened, new characters and on & on... But it was very entertaining.
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December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is great!!! I had a feeling it would be Lucius. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is totally awesome! I can't wait to see who Harry's mate is. I'm hoping it will be Lucius.