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for Defender\'s Armor

by Lomonaaeren

schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
this is sweet
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was really interesting how you wrote this. It was all about potential. I liked how Harry kept leaving Snape and calmly refusing to accept any negative kind of opinion or discussion Snape tried to start or imply. It was almost like training Severus on how to have acceptable conversation skills only without either of them consciously realizing it lol.
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Harry has grown but Snape did not but now maybe because of Harry, Snape will start to. Another person Harry helped overcome. Thank you for an excellent story.
person Abby
schedule December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. It's nice to see a grown Harry who has so much quiet confidence, and a career other then auror is great as well. They were both very much in character, and I loved the glimpse into the future at the end. This is why I always read your works. :)
person delia cerrano
schedule December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fun to read of the meeting and the "set up". Now I'd like to read the chase, maybe how Harry plays Severus, sometimes innocently, before Severus catchs him or they catch each other.