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since harry was not able to even hold off needing relief in the form of a wanking an was only a few hours at most into the train ride it would seem that he will likely need to shoot his load several times a day maybe as many as 4 or 5 times a day. he will likely need relief in the morning, at lunchtime, right after classes let out, once after dinner and once before bed. the problem with him needing relief that often is your rule about the subs have to come to him and offer the first 4 times. collin and dennis are not listed as dom or sub yet so harry could in fact ask them for blow jobs when ever he needs one and not be breaking the rules.

YESSSSS !!!!

Finally, a fellow Australian who writes Dom!Harry *virtual high five.

I'm looking forward to the uh... smuttier chapters. My own story is more story focused and as so i'm not allowed to write smut as of yet.... I SWEAR I WILL WRITE LOTS AND LOTS OF SMUT ONE DAY....just not yet....

Poop.

PLease write more. Dom!Harry is a bit more of a challenge to write...cus he's a GUY GUY and not Sub!Harry, which means HARRY with female mind and who has an awful tendency to sound like the author.

I love Snarry with Harry as the dom- think thats gonna happen here?

Wonderful read!! May I suggest the Patil Twins in a Threesome with Harry?

okay, that just annoys me. it's a pet irk of mine. i'm assuming you meant shuddered rather than shuttered (meaning to pull a shutter across a window) do keep an eye on that, huh? still, far less typos this time out. well done.
anywho, at least har took their advice to heart. even if dear lav was more the toilet brush than the flower type atm, he's right in that she might calm down and he should never turn away a free service. still, crap. finding four mates that will be able to get along will be no easy task. it would crack me up if he got draco though that would be just asking for trouble. draco is far to pampered to share well.

Four! Draco for one... and with Snape already taken... I have no clue about the rest! Maybe Colin next year? That would be two.

Very cool start! I think this story will be very entertaining! Lolz... Harry needs to find 4 mates! That is cool! But will he have a all male sub mates or mixtures? Keke I don mind if it is a mixture of subs. But will Draco be one of them? Lolz... Cannot imagine draco getting along with other subs. Unless he is not as spoilt in this story as others potray him. Anyway! I really like this story! Hope there will be surprises in every chapter you write! :)

"The talk" was absolutely hysterical! Thought I was going to choke I laughed so hard.

Can't wait for more!

Hi I um ok I like this story and was wondering if hermoine and draco could be the mates to harry its just a thought and wonder, cause her being with ron sucks...great story and thanks for the writing
tori

Love the fast update! Nice chapter, hope you can update again soon.

-Applauds- loved it!