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Wonderfully written piece that I cannot wait to see how it ends

Great story so far. Mostly because it's pretty much the only one out there as far as I can tell with Umbridge directly abusing her authority in the school, instead of leaving it up to Draco and the rest of the inquisitor squad (it think it's called that.

Looking forward to reading more.

Oh cliffy. I am looking forward to what is next.

Well this is just getting better and better. So i assume this will stick to Hermione/Umbridge? although Draco may have given Dolores the push i would love to see Umbridge slowly break Hermione down without assistance. And the spanking scene(which is very hot mind you) had me do a small double take.......is out dear golden Gryffindor Hermione Granger perhaps a bit of a masochist? :D :D :D

and very nice touch with the Bastet.

What a cliffhanger! Wow!


This was such an interesting character study of chapter. You've already established that Umbridge hates and looks down on Muggle Borns. But now she feels hatred to those better, more competent. Very telling how she included Bella on the same list as Snape and Dumbledore.

And now, twice, Hermoine's become aroused by these punishments. One can only imagine what Umbridge will do when she finds out that bit of information. (If she hasn't figured it out already.) I see her gaining pleasure out of punishing Hermione, but not carnal pleasure. And I can also see her using this knowledge of Hermione's arousal to add to her power. What better way to further degrade the girl than have gain pleasure from these punishments. The woman is sadistic.

I...I do believe i like this. More please ;D

Oh, I like! There are very few Umbridge dominating Hermione fics and I've always wondered why. Umbridge just loves having control over people and you know she would see someone like Hermione as less than a "real" witch. Loved how she though Hermione was unworthy to even control fully with an Imperio curse.

I love how you used Draco to put the idea into her head. (Would love for him to pop up again. Draco, an 8.5 is a pretty high score.) Umbridge picked the perfect ammunition to control Hermione too. I'm looking forward to more detailed sessions.

BTW, I tried the link you posted at the top of the chapter, but it went to another story review post.

P.S. I didn't even know what a bastet was and now I'm very interested to see where you take that aspect. Poor Hermione.