rate_review Reviews

Still as beautiful as the first time I read it!

How sweet and beautiful!!!!! Sexy as Hell, too!!!!

@1. Omg this story had so much potential. You could go into how they came to be together!!!

DB

Oh I really loved this. Its a sweet snapshot and so well written. Thank you!

Love it!!! It was good, it was hot, it was yummy!! ;-)
Thank you :-)

Wow! This was so fantastic, what a lovely surprise. :) Really great amount of detail, and I also love how you kept them in character. Sometimes it's a little hard to keep Sev there, but you did a beautiful job. This is exactly how I would picture them, Hermione the control freak with a secret need to be dominated, although I'm sure Severus doesn't mind ;) The story flowed very nicely, and I liked the quick thoughts in italics, it helps you understand the chaos that goes through one's mind during such an act.

Hope to see more from you!

Me like!!!

That was quite delicious. :D

A request first:

Can you please exchange your long line of tildes for a < hr > tag? Or if using the RTE, just use the "Insert Horizontal Line" key next to the text size selector box. It doesn't make a difference on full screen, but for those of us few who read stories on half screen, it means we have horizontal scroll due to the long line of tildes. I'd greatly appreciate it, as a reader. :)

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I like the idea of this - a different take on the more prevalent D/s theme with these two that has one in constant control.

You did a wonderful job with the depiction of trust, as well as the sex itself.

A small stylistic note - you've got a bit of redundancy here: He stopped in the bedroom and stopped with a swirl of robes.

Nicely done! Thank you for sharing, and happy writing!