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June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, those were all brilliant. I can't believe what you can come up with from the prompts people give you. I really liked all of them, you are so talented.
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
These shorter one shots really get in, hold your interest, and are done in such a happy way. I am enjoying them tremendously. Love really happy endings. They are so rare in real life.
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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No, you don't do badly at all! You do "goodly". That was a very very good story of how they view each other and why they do
so. They worked it out so well...happily for them and me.
so. They worked it out so well...happily for them and me.
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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #14...
Of course, you're not doing badly, as a matter of fact I think you're
doing a pretty good job bringing out the emotions/premise of the characters
[..and readers :-) ..] in such a short time. But, does it drive you crazy to
not be able to cut loose?
...and now I'm curious about this 'group', can anybody join?
AND
I like this new direction you have put Harry & Dray in...a couple who have 'normal'
arguments that deals with friends & mutual understandings. One would think you were
going through that yourself. ;-)
Of course, you're not doing badly, as a matter of fact I think you're
doing a pretty good job bringing out the emotions/premise of the characters
[..and readers :-) ..] in such a short time. But, does it drive you crazy to
not be able to cut loose?
...and now I'm curious about this 'group', can anybody join?
AND
I like this new direction you have put Harry & Dray in...a couple who have 'normal'
arguments that deals with friends & mutual understandings. One would think you were
going through that yourself. ;-)
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #13...
*almost falls out the chair..* O_O
Say...ummm...I've noticed more & more that some of your one shots
here have too many open endings, what about some closure? That way
there won't be any questins like...WHAT HAPPENED NEXT???
Other than that, you have a good thing going here...
*almost falls out the chair..* O_O
Say...ummm...I've noticed more & more that some of your one shots
here have too many open endings, what about some closure? That way
there won't be any questins like...WHAT HAPPENED NEXT???
Other than that, you have a good thing going here...
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm nice story and a (thank goodness for wimpy me) good happy ending.
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December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How sad is it that Draco needed to use Veritaserum to get Harry to tell the truth about his feelings. While it ends sweetly, unless Harry is willing to be more open, there could be problems.
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December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Draco, you're an idiot. You're such a coward. Well, eventually, Harry will have the family that he wants, and if it's not with Draco, at least it'll be with someone who can make him laugh and smile again. /sad
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December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I HATE that ending! I like that Draco is suffering because of his decisions but he's not suffering enough to fix it!
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December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #12...
O_o
*runs to window to look outside...and sees fiery meteor showers raining down on
the earth, cities are devastated, earthquakes have destroyed parts of California,
dogs are living with cats & monkeys are in the trees with birds..*
OH my Gawd! Did YOU just do a mpreg????? Not youuuu!!! O__O
I thought that shit was set in stone!
But, then I suppose you had to do this, in order to get ready for what you have planned
in tha' future.
Oh, and for what it's worth, Draco deserved that 'middle finger' that is now his life...and
you did a good job with emotions in this piece. :-)
O_o
*runs to window to look outside...and sees fiery meteor showers raining down on
the earth, cities are devastated, earthquakes have destroyed parts of California,
dogs are living with cats & monkeys are in the trees with birds..*
OH my Gawd! Did YOU just do a mpreg????? Not youuuu!!! O__O
I thought that shit was set in stone!
But, then I suppose you had to do this, in order to get ready for what you have planned
in tha' future.
Oh, and for what it's worth, Draco deserved that 'middle finger' that is now his life...and
you did a good job with emotions in this piece. :-)