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A couple of ideas I have for your Brainy Girl's series

1) Narcissa and/or other pureblood milfs is/gets knocked up by Harry

2) Harry and a girl or girls role play i.e. Chap. 9

Can we get more Harry/Astoria? Perhaps a scenario where Draco is taken into custody, charged with the crime of [insert plot device] and Harry stays behind to get a statement from Astoria Malfoy. (Narcissa can also be present which would make for a nice three-way). Astoria is understandably upset for whichever reason and wants to know what will happen to her husband and if there's anything she can do.

Lead-in to Harry seducing Astoria and then revealing that she isn't the only Lady Malfoy that has been cheating on her husband which cues Narcissa to enter.

An excellent set of stories, but there is one thing that annoys me:

Wither vs writhe

Wither means to dry up or shrivel
Writhe means to twist or squirm

I know what you're trying to convey, but i can't help but picture the girl of the day shriveling up and turning to dust as Harry teases her...

could you do some more Harry/Tonks, harry/Susan Bones, and some more Harry/Lily Evans Potter(his mom) ones please?

Been enjoying all of your Lead Male + Any and Every attractive female series. I noticed you were interested in idea's and thought I'd make a couple of general suggestions to help. Firstly I understand that the stories are written as a series of unconnected single chapters but I also think you might like to consider making some more linked chapters, These chapters could be direct sequels possibly featuring same characters or different encounters in a small timeframe. Or they could be Linked chapters possibly all sharing some common/linkage concept... Birthdays, Quidditch, etc...

You might also consider making a mini-series with each chapter embodying a concept of a larger whole. [Deadly Sins, Heavenly Virtues, Starsigns, Classical Elements, etc...]

My final idea is that you might consider exploring more ideas and quirks of the characters in relation to their Bedroom activities... I am of course alluding to Fetishes. Their are a large number of these and while most are probably a bit far out there compared to what you or your average reader might want to read even looking at ways to bring new things into the encounters might give you new idea's. (Light Bondage or Sex Aids are easily usable as a focus of a scene or as a minor addition)

I saw in the archive of our own that you've started writing different pairings than your usual ones...

Might I request a Harry/Molly one or maybe a Harry/Minerva or Harry/Poppy one?

Just thought you might be open to it...

Awesome chapter. Clueless gay Malfoy lol.

I've been enjoying this series. Any chance you'd consider writing a Hermione-centric version?

awesome story.

Maybe you can put his future daughters in as pairings?