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Have Tonks be Harry and Harry be a random girl, thank you in advance.

Could you please make an M rated chapter with the Carrow twins Flora and Hestia???

thats the best chapter you have put out in a long time i would love to see another harry/tonks

Hey, I've been checking back in on this series for a long time without saying anything, and I want to say that I really enjoy it and will continue to keep coming back :) Don't ever stop!

Do a Hermione only scene. Its been ages since you wrote about her.

How about Susan Bones and Amelia Bones? Petunia? I think Sybll Trelawney too

This is a great story great story plots for the non M-rated chapters as well keep up the good work :)

Review for chapter 242, 243 and 244. I'm gonna be honest, and I will tell you that they weren't that great. 242, with Gabrielle was like a re-run of the cuisine incident with Fleur quite a few chapters ago and not very interesting. Yes, I admit, it was cute, but not in my tastes. I'm not flaming you, honest, I'm open and franc with you. The next one, 243, was a bit more interesting. Original idea, it's the first time were Harry have a sexual relationship with a partner who is openly asking for a child. We see his noble nature, wanting to be part of the child's life, not at all comfortable with the idea of having a kid and not been part of his or her life somehow. But what happened to the Harry so sure of himself in most of your chapters? I mean yes, in there he wasn't a virgin but it took quite a bit of convincing from Parvati to bring him ready for action. So that one got a ''meh'' and a head on the side as answer. The last one, 244, I've gotta admit that I read about only half before I decided to go elsewhere. That one didn't arouse my interest, at all. Well, thanks for the update by the way. Next time could you try to work this idea? You could use the idea that James is going away for a long time, like around six months on an Auror mission or maybe a mandatory business trip to another country to oversee his assets there and ask Harry, who is the oldest, to look after his mother and sisters, that it's his duty as ''The man of the household'' to do so. A week later, he's screwing both his mother and sisters, who insisted to ''repay'' is great work in being said Man of the house. :)

Wow, excellent chapter! Too bad it's just a one time deal! It would have been interesting to see something adulterous develop from that encounter! Well let's go read the others new chapters. :)

Whew, this last one was scorching! Really great! It's nice to see Harry in charge and use the two black sisters at his whims. Maybe you could work a way to put Andromeda in the lot too for another instalment? Really good! Well, let's go read the new Naruto chapters now. :)