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for It Came Upon a Midnight Clear

by Japhia

person jujukitty
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yes i did indeed like the chapter :) like how you handled the scene the guys stumbled into and the trial, just graphic enough without being overly so. not to mention how she maneuvered sev so smoothly into her decision, i giggled watching him flounder and pout. and i'm still really enjoying the relationship between sev and siri. keep up the godo work :D
person SinfulMind
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I so hoped that Harry would wake up in this chapter :D But, never mind. I can wait... I want to see his reaction to Snape being forced to tae care of him :D
person ChaosLady
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Harry is alive and Vernon got the Kiss. I read some of your other stories the night before and I like them but I was so tired I forgot to leave a review. I also don't think there are as good as this one. Excellent update.
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the quick update. I was about eighteen when I first started to read the Harry Potter books and I have to say that I always assumed (from reading between the lines) that there was a HELL of lot more abuse going on than was actually said. Looking forward to your next chapter.
person LeaniaSTL
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good so far. Writing on my Nook sucks, but I thought to let you know I read it and await more.
person ChaosLady
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG. You managed an evil cliffhanger in the first chapter! You have to update this and soon!
person SinfulMind
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An interesting beginning :)And quite a cliffhanger at the end, you meanie :D
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update soon, you caught my interest!!!!
person BAFan
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Hedwig! You're off to a rousing start; can't wait to read more.
person djaddict
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You've really peaked my interest, must have more!

And yeah! Sirius is alive!