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March 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
interesting. hope you continue
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December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
good start
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June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
good good good more more more!
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good but I can't figure out which way it's going. He feels friendly toward Hermione & Ron but doesn't remember them. He really likes Severus, feels drawn to him even (yea!!) Sirius, he doesn't seem to have a very deep connection like usual. Seems like he is right in the middle. Maybe he will be able to be his own person in this one since he is in effect starting over in his relationships.
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Boy do they have quite the road a head of them; Harry can remember basic things, but people and significant events are gone? Is that the gist of it? Though this will be great to get Sev and Harry together, clean slate for Harry and perhaps Sev will see past his preconceived notions to who Harry really is. Keep up the good work, looking forward to more!
Leania
Leania
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So good! Very original. Always love Harry/Severus stories anyway. I have a hunch Sev is going to be very shocked by some of the things he learns. I think he will also be shocked by the person that Harry was and hopefully will be again. I think...and hope...that this more people driven than plot driven. Lots of interactions as people try to live their lives together in various relationships to each other.
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is very good so far and I will enjoy reading future chapters. However, I did see one mistake with continuity. In the first chapter it is stated that it is the first day of school which is on September 1st in the Harry Potter storyline, but then in Chapter 3 when he comes out of his coma the nurse tells him he was found on June 5th and it is now June 29th. I thought you might like to know about this issue. Looking forward to future chapters.
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read a snarry in a while, I hope this story wil continue! Update soon!
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December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. I think that even Snape would be majorly appalled at how horridly Harry is treated by the Dursley's. I think deep down he did care about Harry. I mean nearly every book, he saved Harry from something and once Harry, Hermione and Ron from Lupin when he turned werewolf.
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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! More! lol
Nice to see the Dursleys punished swiftly, well done.
Pets Harry, poor baby.
Nice to see the Dursleys punished swiftly, well done.
Pets Harry, poor baby.