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I have caught up and all I can really say is wow! The depth you have reached with these characters has surpassed all of my expectations! I find myself really feeling bad for both Draco and Ron, they both love her, but both are just so...wounded...I hope that when this is all over there is healing for them both, as well as everyone else. I have found that I just couldn't stop reading, much like with Rowling's original works. Through reading this I am FINALLY understanding what everyone sees in Draco, beyond his obvious abilities as a white ferret! I really hope in the end that They find happiness together!

Thanks for posting again and so soon. Nice! If, I were Hermione I would have had a breakdown. Draco, Ron, Harry, and fighting Voldemort "Again"...too much. Poor girl, talk about stress.

I've been lurking for a long time on this site, reading and not reviewing, but this story is so wonderful that I feel the need to review for the first time ever. I really love the way you've developed the characters, and I've never felt a connection to a story in this way. I'm not sure what else to say, except please keep going, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

As always loved the chapter but:

"Kingsley

Ron defending Draco? Alright who replaced him with a robot? Tho Hermione needs to take a chill pill and or lay off the bitchieo's.
Post soon, I want to know how this plays out!!!!

My second review of this story and I realized it is coming with very similar circumstances. You've setup a scenario where I am left thinking, "Please don't make bad_scenario_1 or bad_scenario_2 happen!" It also comes after another disagreement which again (at least IMO) has a tad too hasty reactions from one or both of them.

I'd really like to smack Draco around for being such a wimp. I could understand him being reluctant or even unable (unwilling to risk his family's lives) to revolt against the dark lord during the second war. In fact, it's his seemingly hopeless situation that I think myself and most other Dramione (or other Draco fics) fans cling to when believing he could seek redemption after the war. Now, with what seemingly is just a single horcrux and a possessed Harry, his first reaction is to throw in the towel and just assume that the world will collapse around him again!

Then to Hermione...deciding that based on Draco's first reaction and giving no time to sit back and actually think rationally, that Draco is just scum. I disagree with the notion that *this* Draco (IE VotF version) can not love or is not truly in love with Hermione. I will concede that Hermione's emotions have been haywire for the past months and that likely helped cause what I see as a knee jerk reaction. Still, I am saddened to see her turn so quickly against him and push all of the emotions and love they've developed away.

I think the suspense is added on since we only get to see Hermione's reactions. Again, I want to smack Draco myself, but I think there are probably a wide range of emotions going through him right now. His first thoughts are probably to his Mother, his Father (if maybe somewhat less), and I'd guess mostly to Hermione. He can probably envision many horrible things happening to all of them. Instead of thinking first how to stop it all from happening, he reverts to his past and thinks of despair first. Given time and especially given Hermione's influence on him over the past months I have no doubt he would come around.

So now to my begging:

Please don't make this ruin what they have built! Continuing obstacles are great and needed, but not a clean break!
Please please please don't make this somehow push Hermione back to Ron!

I know you probably have had the plot outline figured out for quite a while, but I figure just in case to beg against going a direction I would hate to see. Needless to say, great writing as usual!

Holy fuck....You know shit has hit the fan when

1. Hermione is 1 cunt hair away from blinding some fools.

2. She contemplates torture.

3. Ron Fucking Weasley goes to the defense of Draco Fucking Malfoy, now for this one hell froze over.

Granted Ron does not know that Hermione and Draco slept together for if he did he just might have egged her on lol. But anyway shows a real growth when HE is the one trying to get Hermione to calm her tits down. I enjoyed the show of loyalty from Isobel in regards to Draco and while I am not usually taking the sides of Slytherins, I will say this, to have fear is to be human, not everyone can play the Hero of the story and their is no shame in that. It just sucks that he admitted that he would go back if called, that is when the fear becomes a fucking problem and ya need to reel that shit in and grow a set. And it looks like Hermione knows that Theodora could get into a spot of trouble if her name is gets connected to the dividing lines magic. I honestly don't know how else to put what I wanna say down so instead I shall use these Gifs as a visual to my emotions.

Hermione Tearing into Draco and loosing her cool with her Girl Isobel:
http://25.media.tumblr.com/0c097b7a12cc70f05bd31ddc8500337c/tumblr_mi8lp49iSq1rktmoto1_500.gif

you is a cold momma Hermione lol.

When Hermione is dishing out orders and laying down the law to her Toravasi and showing that Voldy is on borrowed time, cause she is coming for that ass:
http://24.media.tumblr.com/36fda3cbf7db56bdda010ee45af7b456/tumblr_mif4490iAj1rdb06mo1_400.gif

When Ron stops Hermione from going full lioness on Draco sweet succulent ass......no homo btw :

http://24.media.tumblr.com/20537496cf36a680a656a6f489a148ff/tumblr_mhareb5wFO1s4u0cso1_400.gif

-waits patiently for the next chapter-

OMG, Ron and Draco in the same room....How am I going to be able to wait an entire week for another post?

I just finished chapter 9 and have to say that it was so well written and very touching. I am sitting here drying my eyes as I type this and finding myself looking forward to the rest. In keeping with the theme...Thank you!

Oh Draco bear, still so afraid of standing up for what's right, so afraid of failure and rejection.
Hermione and him are both being right little bitches right now aren't they? Gotta love a crying Draco. Wanna drink those tears.
I thought of another song. Mumford and sons thistles and weeds. Great song that is.
Ron and Draco in the same building and they aren't killing each other. Nice.
So glad you had a nice break and that you can now do regular postings again. Only seven more to go?!? Wow cool. :D