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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Harry is much more powerful than her. I think it's time to add Draco into the mix.some
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, no Bullshit this time, this will seriously be a short review as I have work in a bit.
My feels for this chapter:
1. On the outside: http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/1697/pdkqnc1325823263.jpg
2. On the inside: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lt33771vrj1qjwwfh.gif
I loved the re-bonding of Hermione and Isobel or 'Hermisobel'. In my opinion Isobel has gone through the most character development than anyone else in this story and what makes that so impressive is that it was ALL from someone else s POV. The reason I give this to her and not Draco is because unlike him she has stuck to her guns and has not reverted back to her old self. Hermione's thoughts on them both this chapter perfectly described them. Draco made all the pretty speeches and made nice with people and apologized for being a douchenozzle.........but only because he thought it was the opportune moment to do that and did not have full conviction in his words. As I said before he is a silver tongued devil but actions reveal true intent he while he talked the talk he most certainly could not walk the walk. in the end he turned out more like his father than even he may believe, which is just tragic. Isobel on the other hand didn't make any fancy speeches, did not apologize for shit that was not her fault but was still given shit and spat upon until the point where she wanted to die.....and instead of going out by going back to her old self and insulting Hermione before she went to kill herself...she treated her like a friend and said thank you and goodbye,she maintained her change to the very end. She has been to the other side now and seen just how she perhaps used to treat people and has grown from her experiences and isn't just putting on a show to please people. Draco 'needs' the worlds validation that he has changed for the better even if he knows it's false..........Isobel only needs Hermione.
ahem...now that the sob fest is done,HOLY shit Harrymort, Hermione caught him with his pants down last time, now he is ready for her. He practically H4XED her god mode with his uber shield. Hope Ginny is not too hurt. At this point though even if Hermione does manage t save Harry, his reputation is all but in shambles and even though it was Voldy pulling the strings, it was still done with his body and his is the face that people who have been hurt are going to remember even if they know the truth.
-waits patiently for next chapter-
My feels for this chapter:
1. On the outside: http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/1697/pdkqnc1325823263.jpg
2. On the inside: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lt33771vrj1qjwwfh.gif
I loved the re-bonding of Hermione and Isobel or 'Hermisobel'. In my opinion Isobel has gone through the most character development than anyone else in this story and what makes that so impressive is that it was ALL from someone else s POV. The reason I give this to her and not Draco is because unlike him she has stuck to her guns and has not reverted back to her old self. Hermione's thoughts on them both this chapter perfectly described them. Draco made all the pretty speeches and made nice with people and apologized for being a douchenozzle.........but only because he thought it was the opportune moment to do that and did not have full conviction in his words. As I said before he is a silver tongued devil but actions reveal true intent he while he talked the talk he most certainly could not walk the walk. in the end he turned out more like his father than even he may believe, which is just tragic. Isobel on the other hand didn't make any fancy speeches, did not apologize for shit that was not her fault but was still given shit and spat upon until the point where she wanted to die.....and instead of going out by going back to her old self and insulting Hermione before she went to kill herself...she treated her like a friend and said thank you and goodbye,she maintained her change to the very end. She has been to the other side now and seen just how she perhaps used to treat people and has grown from her experiences and isn't just putting on a show to please people. Draco 'needs' the worlds validation that he has changed for the better even if he knows it's false..........Isobel only needs Hermione.
ahem...now that the sob fest is done,HOLY shit Harrymort, Hermione caught him with his pants down last time, now he is ready for her. He practically H4XED her god mode with his uber shield. Hope Ginny is not too hurt. At this point though even if Hermione does manage t save Harry, his reputation is all but in shambles and even though it was Voldy pulling the strings, it was still done with his body and his is the face that people who have been hurt are going to remember even if they know the truth.
-waits patiently for next chapter-
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, things are getting dangerous now. I don't know how they are going to do this! I'm on the edge of my seat woman, don't leave me here too long. Oh Harry, the adventure never really ends for you.
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! What the... I cant believe what is happening. Oh Draco, do something... take things in your hands and finally do something to make your life and future better.
You know sometimes I just wanted to scream and cry for Draco and Hermione while I was reading. Cant wait to see what else is there for them. Hopefully, they will make up in the end! :)
Look forward to the next chapter.
You know sometimes I just wanted to scream and cry for Draco and Hermione while I was reading. Cant wait to see what else is there for them. Hopefully, they will make up in the end! :)
Look forward to the next chapter.
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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Your story has me up until 3:30 I'm the morning just so I can read it! This is quite honestly one of the best stories I've read in a very long time. I really hope you update really really soon!
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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is it normal to be this disappointed when the chapter is over so soon? Why must you do this to me? D:
I honestly love your story so much.
haha its so full of angst and greatly written
you have talent and I'm glad we can enjoy it
Please keep up the amazing writting!
I honestly love your story so much.
haha its so full of angst and greatly written
you have talent and I'm glad we can enjoy it
Please keep up the amazing writting!
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Crap, you found me out. On the Internet, nobody knows you're a awkward black chick addicted to fanfiction (of the naughty variety). But you and all your wonder found me out. I think I love you. And I do! I scream at my phone at two in the morning when I should be working on my projects for paying clients, I laugh and sob a bit and swoon over Zabini and evil Harry (whom, by the way, you have turned into a crying bitch which I love and hate and love. Love a crying Harry, love an angry rough Harry even more, can't stand weak whiney Harry).
Oh lawdie what has Ginny gone off and done now!? WTF DRACO!!!! I love that quick tongue of his but he is a fucking idiot when he is cruel. It is only after he shatters everything around him and his feet are bleeding does he realize that it can't be fixed with "I'm sorry". Now how will he get hermione back...anything to piss off a Weasley, which I kinda understand...for horrible reasons.
Now as I have never said "oh no he didn't grrrl" in my life, I will reserve them for the final chapter. Shock me woman!
Oh lawdie what has Ginny gone off and done now!? WTF DRACO!!!! I love that quick tongue of his but he is a fucking idiot when he is cruel. It is only after he shatters everything around him and his feet are bleeding does he realize that it can't be fixed with "I'm sorry". Now how will he get hermione back...anything to piss off a Weasley, which I kinda understand...for horrible reasons.
Now as I have never said "oh no he didn't grrrl" in my life, I will reserve them for the final chapter. Shock me woman!
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Once again this one will sadly be a short review.
Holy
Freaking
Frog legs
Shit got real in this chapter, what with Hermione going all sailor freaking moon on Voldemort and jacking him up with love lol. Harry can brag to his kids that he reflected the killing curse back due to the love of his mother.........Hermione -do not fuck with me- Granger absorbed that shit like it was nothing and turned it into love. While I initially feared she would get some massive power up I must say this was tastefully done and when ya stop to think about it, absolutely necessary. Voldemort may be using a different body, but it is still fucking VOLDEMORT. They barely managed to put his ass down last time and at that time they had YEARS of Dumbledore's pre planning/scheming along with a FUCK TON of luck and the slim assumption that Harry would not only last till after all of the other Horocrux's were destroyed but manage to come back from the dead and Voldemort's wand would fuck him over and Harry would get the winning shot.
-sigh- and once again...Draco's mouth gets him knee deep in even more shit lol. Boy needs a good slapping and then a hug. His parents set him up for failure, that kid cannot function like other people. It's like douche is coded matrix style into his very dna and I get the odd feeling he was expecting Ron to fuck him up after his last comment and wasn't expecting:
"Ron took a deep breath and stared back at Draco head on.
Holy
Freaking
Frog legs
Shit got real in this chapter, what with Hermione going all sailor freaking moon on Voldemort and jacking him up with love lol. Harry can brag to his kids that he reflected the killing curse back due to the love of his mother.........Hermione -do not fuck with me- Granger absorbed that shit like it was nothing and turned it into love. While I initially feared she would get some massive power up I must say this was tastefully done and when ya stop to think about it, absolutely necessary. Voldemort may be using a different body, but it is still fucking VOLDEMORT. They barely managed to put his ass down last time and at that time they had YEARS of Dumbledore's pre planning/scheming along with a FUCK TON of luck and the slim assumption that Harry would not only last till after all of the other Horocrux's were destroyed but manage to come back from the dead and Voldemort's wand would fuck him over and Harry would get the winning shot.
-sigh- and once again...Draco's mouth gets him knee deep in even more shit lol. Boy needs a good slapping and then a hug. His parents set him up for failure, that kid cannot function like other people. It's like douche is coded matrix style into his very dna and I get the odd feeling he was expecting Ron to fuck him up after his last comment and wasn't expecting:
"Ron took a deep breath and stared back at Draco head on.
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Ginny! I was getting worried about her and how she was feeling about all of this. I hope Ron and Hermione get back together though I think Draco will grow from all of this.
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gah, why does Draco have to keep moving further and further from the better man that he had become!? We have Hermione giving him opening after opening to redeem himself and he is just ignoring them! Then she goes all goddess and flicks away a killing curse like it was a musquito, saving his life in spite of his stupidity! That all happens and he reverts even more back to the arrogant, stupid boy of his past!? Aaaaahhhhhhh!!!!
My only hope now is that you are building up a complete breakdown for Draco. Perhaps he needs to lose any and all love and respect from Hermione before he will wake up and become a man. Then maybe that can happen when he is needed most and he can actually prove his loyalty and return the favor to save her. At this point with his regression I just can't see how they can end up together in the long run without a dramatic, powerful event to bring them back. I really hope that can happen since my hopeless romantic side is never happy if love doesn't win out in the end!
Great writing as always!
My only hope now is that you are building up a complete breakdown for Draco. Perhaps he needs to lose any and all love and respect from Hermione before he will wake up and become a man. Then maybe that can happen when he is needed most and he can actually prove his loyalty and return the favor to save her. At this point with his regression I just can't see how they can end up together in the long run without a dramatic, powerful event to bring them back. I really hope that can happen since my hopeless romantic side is never happy if love doesn't win out in the end!
Great writing as always!