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What a chapter, you know something I had this vision of Hermoine as a dark lady, and Draco her dark lord when she was thinking of the state of the Minstery of Magic, I feel like she'd be the type of person who'd be a fair dark lady to keep things in hand ya know? Because I feeeel that something has changed about Herm, and for all her knoweldge and courage there's always been a level of creative sylitherin to keep things balanced. I agree with the fact that humanity will continue to breed darkness due to prejudice nature, so why not counter it and retain control of said nature. Its a nice play on things. Ok my rammmblings went on far to long* tee hee* Chapter length was wonderful I was indeed content, though I wished for more I fell in love with Herms new home and loved how we saw draco run away, but for the most part, I wonder how he and his family are doing ya know, now that the war is over with, did his father buy his way out, is Delores still making laws, did nothing change? What lines have been blurred that a young man sent to fight evil at his age, that the death toll has been so high, that even after this war will people still cling to there own ways. When will it come to pass that men won't cling to there traditions of old and hold there fear as mass moments of confusion to allow a mad man like another Voldemort/half blood to once again to pull the wool over there eyes to make them see, or will it take the proper steps forward to embrace both past and future. Will Herm finally snap at Ginny and will Ginny finally break herself as she takes on the roles she taken. I would like to see the inner workings that make Hermonie Tick, and wonder if all a long she was the hero that was destined for greatness than harry potter ever was. Love ya bye

Tori

Loving this story!!!! I agree with the above reviews. This is what I imagined things would be after the war. No jumping up and down happy and going back to school happy. The loss and grief is so pervasive that kids have a hard time coping. They are kids who fought in a war for years! Anyway, I will stop now before I go on a rant. I am curious as to what is happening to Draco. I am also curious what will be the fallout between Hermione and Harry and Ron. I don't know if you plan to have Ginny and Hermione ever reconcile. Are you going to kill off Hermione's parents? Lots of questions only because I am impatient and really like where this story is heading. Keep up the good work!

This is a really good story. I was very in to it from the first line. I do hope you will continue it!!

You are off to a good start. I thought the writing was strong, descriptive, and fluid.

So far, this seems like the type of story that would do well on ff.net. I would highly recommend you posting there as well if you want more reviews.

Love this already!

I'm really looking forward to the next chapters!! What a great way to start!