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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And so it began. . .
D-Day has come! There're so many things to review here: from the George/Hermione moment, to Hermione's scary episode, to her arrival at Hogwarts and the cliffhanger at the end ("what the...? Draco? Draco Malfoy?", more shocked than our heroin).
Now, I'm a little confused about my own expectations regarding the story. True, I'd have never thought of George/Hermione and I wonder what he's thinking BUT they seemed quite natural - to me at least. Am I cheating on Dramione?
As for them, precisely, I really want to know how they'll get together. I can't figure out how their 'first' meeting will be. Also, what is Headmistress McGonagall planning?
Thank you a lot for being so consistent with your updates. I don't like to review that much but seeing so many updates just make me want to give you support and tell you how I appreciate what you write.
D-Day has come! There're so many things to review here: from the George/Hermione moment, to Hermione's scary episode, to her arrival at Hogwarts and the cliffhanger at the end ("what the...? Draco? Draco Malfoy?", more shocked than our heroin).
Now, I'm a little confused about my own expectations regarding the story. True, I'd have never thought of George/Hermione and I wonder what he's thinking BUT they seemed quite natural - to me at least. Am I cheating on Dramione?
As for them, precisely, I really want to know how they'll get together. I can't figure out how their 'first' meeting will be. Also, what is Headmistress McGonagall planning?
Thank you a lot for being so consistent with your updates. I don't like to review that much but seeing so many updates just make me want to give you support and tell you how I appreciate what you write.
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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffhanger! Please update soon! Can't wait to continue reading!
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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@7: Well..that was odd, very good, but odd for me. Not sure how I feel about the Hermione self punishment thing, liked the chapter otherwise. Cross my fingers for an update soon!!
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November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O-M-G! George and Hermione?
How come I'm not even shocked? Well, it'd be harder for me to ship Draco/Hermione in the story if there was a George/Hermione pairing but...but... honestly, I don't feel upset by that possible pairing. That must be your writing: I feel so close to Hermione that it's easy to understand why she's considering George.
I want to read this chapter again.
OMG, George & Hermione!
How come I'm not even shocked? Well, it'd be harder for me to ship Draco/Hermione in the story if there was a George/Hermione pairing but...but... honestly, I don't feel upset by that possible pairing. That must be your writing: I feel so close to Hermione that it's easy to understand why she's considering George.
I want to read this chapter again.
OMG, George & Hermione!
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Emotional, heart wrenching, and apprehensive all in one go, I have to say that this subject matter is close to my heart. I use to suffer with panic attacks and major depressive disorder. I've found that this story has taken a steady pace, now I worry because living in a flat like that by herself can do that for a person, so having George perhaps as a friend might help our girl to recover. Ah but will she allow herself to take it. You know something I felt that Herm will never be over Ron in the sense that he was her first and her friend but on the other hand she's moving on to bigger and better things. I feel that I can't wait till she gets to school ya know and to see how things progress. Can I ask you something as a writer to writer? can you continue to write this even after you end? Its just I've fallen in love ya know, ooh don't mind me I just get tingles everytime I read your work.
Sa-de
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Howdy.
After reading the first few chapters, I am intrigued and can't wait to read more. I've enjoyed your approach so far, and your character for Hermione. I hope that you post again soon!
After reading the first few chapters, I am intrigued and can't wait to read more. I've enjoyed your approach so far, and your character for Hermione. I hope that you post again soon!
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far!! I do hope that in the next chapter or so that Hermione will go get her parents, I think she should, they should be there for her, she thinks she is sparing them but really she is making it harder and more painful to herself. KEEP IT UP!! Can't wait for your next update! Hopefully it will be soon, fingers crossed!
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like what you write. I miss HP and the way it ended - though I absolutely love JKR - left me with this unyielding feeling that something was missing.
I wonder how Draco and Hermione will get together in this context but the way you're writing Hermione's character is really realistic. It feels right so I do hope you'll keep writing this story --- do I need to precise that I'm totally hooked?
I wonder how Draco and Hermione will get together in this context but the way you're writing Hermione's character is really realistic. It feels right so I do hope you'll keep writing this story --- do I need to precise that I'm totally hooked?
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you're going to take this story slow. I want to know what happened b/w her and Ron. Ugh, I would be sooo happy if you broke up Ginny and Harry, but I doubt you're going to do it. I'm sooo over reading about them in Dramione books.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
YAY, I found this story on ff.net, now I can follow it.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
YAY, I found this story on ff.net, now I can follow it.
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First off I have to say thank you! This story is a fresh breath of air for Her/draco story and post war story that follows your line of thinking and planing asures me of what a true ending would have consisted of. Though I wish the chapters where a bit longer I'm thankful for the continued comment to writing and posting the way you are so I'm not concern as there's something to look forward to at the end of the day. I would like to see how you write the other characters, I like how harry and ron turned out and even molly. The soul grabbing anguish is understandably real and tastefully done so I look forward to more. Plot wise I cannot wait to see how you continue to unweave the plight of the wizarding world after the war. Its all very exciting and I can't wait. I hope you like the review as I don't give many out cause I'm shy about how to tell someone about another's work, I don't like passing judgement on someone else cause its not fair but I hope you like this as I'm a teacher so awesome work kay!
Tori
Tori